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Apr 13, 2024

I don't think reality ever stopped anyone from shipping anything irl.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:3

Apr 12, 2024

Cards in Space.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:2

Apr 12, 2024

Nice Sailor Moon reference you got there.
Also a good idea to send girls into space, less payload and all, too bad those damn real world ethics committees would be a pain if one would even dare to make the suggestion.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:1

Apr 12, 2024

To:lolitroy

Also head.
But not in a lewd way.

The Society for the Study of Otherworldly Visual Culture

Chapter:1

Apr 12, 2024

To:Bubbles

I decided to keep the first two old episodes of chapter 1 and cut back on a lot of the new summary esque intro I added some days ago.
There is very little focus on the narrator in all but the first and the last chapter anyway. Some of that was on purpose.

Maybe this should have been written in third person, or maybe my focus on the club(members) instead of the pov character was a mistake, but I don't feel like throwing out all chapters and rewritting it as something that it wasn't meant to be.

Maybe I'll add some more flavor to the narration through the pov character later on, once I've gottten some mental distance from the story, but for now I wanted this last chapter out and be done with it.

The Society for the Study of Otherworldly Visual Culture

Chapter:1

Apr 11, 2024

Well, you nailed that wordcount.

the color of shattered dreams

Chapter:6

Apr 11, 2024

To:lolitroy

I meant if you intend to make the members of the magic academy 'club' the magical girl to death and call it mission accomplished.

verb: club; 3rd person present: clubs; past tense: clubbed; past participle: clubbed; gerund or present participle: clubbing

beat (a person or animal) with a club or similar implement.
"the islanders clubbed whales to death"

the color of shattered dreams

Chapter:5

Apr 11, 2024

Okay, we are 5 chapters in.
Is this supposed to end up as a 'seal walks into a club' kinda thingy, or have you given up all pretenses to follow the theme?

the color of shattered dreams

Chapter:5

Apr 11, 2024

Chapter 3... in which lolo realizes that this month's theme had actually been 'Magic Academy Clubs' instead of "Magical Girl", and tries to salvage the plot by faking a moonlanding.

the color of shattered dreams

Chapter:3

Apr 11, 2024

11/10 for the chapter title alone.

the color of shattered dreams

Chapter:1

Apr 06, 2024

To:Steward McOy

Thanks,
I am especially proud of the fate incantation, but probably for the wrong reasons.

The Society for the Study of Otherworldly Visual Culture

Chapter:3

Apr 06, 2024

To:Kirb

The power of 'Lewd' based spells.

To be honest, the split was very unfortunate for Orenji, and without the crowd control, Aka wouldn't have been able to finish the incantation and have been frog feed too.

The Society for the Study of Otherworldly Visual Culture

Chapter:3

Apr 05, 2024

Yeah, kinda.
I winged it a bit with Shiro(na) and Midori(ya).

That aside, the characters are named after colors with pairs being complementary colors for characters that have different genders and play somewhat opposing roles during the dialog or later on. But don't interpret too much into it, it's not some kinda totally deep thought or 200 IQ move by any means.

The Society for the Study of Otherworldly Visual Culture

Chapter:2

Apr 05, 2024

To:Steward McOy

Cat.

The Society for the Study of Otherworldly Visual Culture

Chapter:1

Dec 31, 2023

Pretty solid work and pretty detailed about the environments. There were 2-3 name drops about spirits and that organisation, I assume those would be related to the first work, but I think it works fine. If the reader doesn't know the other content, he will have some questions, but that might be a good thing (building mystery) if you do explain those later on a bit.

Tetraprisma: Backtrack

Chapter:1

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