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Aug 27, 2023

Finally Keith scored in an official match.
Hope that his stamina lasts if he is switched in again.

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:43

Aug 26, 2023

A date it is!

The Nerd's Love for the Popular Girl's Secret Indie Band

Chapter:16

Aug 26, 2023

Keith used Substitute.
It's super effective!

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:42

Aug 25, 2023

Poor Sean. The opposite of plot armor hit him.
So next match is Keith's turn to be switched in for a moment...

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:41

Aug 24, 2023

Nice recording session, too bad they noticed the red light, or Masaki could have secretly listened in a bit.

The Nerd's Love for the Popular Girl's Secret Indie Band

Chapter:15

Aug 23, 2023

Congratulations on finishing your first work here, that alone is an achievement quite some of the other contest participants didn't get too.

Hope you can improve on some of the areas that are still lacking skills in and maybe find a good editor.

Love in Real Life Game

Chapter:23

Aug 23, 2023

Some of the usual issues with some of the dialogs, but all in all a nice way to wrap it up where it started, even if it is just a temporary endpoint.
Some proper editing and some changes to the dialog here and there would likely help to keep readers engaged.

Love in Real Life Game

Chapter:22

Aug 23, 2023

Well, looks like Carlos earned his long awaited introduction fair and square.

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:40

Aug 21, 2023

Delightfully devilish Jessica.

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:39

Aug 20, 2023

Seems Masaki dropped the ball here, should have at least asked her about the lyrics...

The Nerd's Love for the Popular Girl's Secret Indie Band

Chapter:14

Aug 20, 2023

To:Christian Widjaya

Ah okay, I thought the confession would be it and everything else would come way later. Well, then I am looking forward to the next chapter.

As for the timing, I just happened to have Nymphaea and HimeXHime on my to read list and when I wanted to start reading the former I saw the notification.

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:38

Aug 20, 2023

Nice climax of the romance plot for now, I'll be honest, for a moment I wasn't sure you wouldn't double down on the missunderstanding/drama again.

On to the basketball we go?

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:38

Aug 19, 2023

If you find the time, you might want to rephrase some line, like "run away there's someone angry", this seems like it was translated from another line/concept that worked in you language but doesn't really translate 1to1.

But focus on finishing first, there are less then 2 weeks left.
Maybe take your time and find someone to be you editor later on.

Love in Real Life Game

Chapter:21

Aug 19, 2023

Yeah, I'd go with chaotic neutral after the reading the last chapter too.

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:38

Aug 19, 2023

Good job on finishing the (first volume of the) novel.
It was an enjoyable read.

I'll try to catch you on discord one of these days too.
(Not much to criticize as I really lack writing and editing experience. To be quite honest, reading your's and some other's entries really made me realize a lot of shortcomings of my own story.)

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:39

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