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A passionate game enthusiast who like to design game concepts, and story-writing at the same time. Loves writing engaging stories or serious, slow and interconnecting stories. For hire.
Jun 02, 2023
To:Glenville Seru
Hahahaha, yeah me too. Then I could imagine that there's a zipper or a cd scratching sound as they got embarrassed. ROFL
To:Magecrafter
Thank you, it's more emotional than being epic tho.😆
To:Hunter Epicness
Haha, I imagined a cool African-American and then got the image of a rapper or someone like that. I tried my best to imitate them. Thank you👍
Thank you. I hope you enjoyed it.
Some grammatical mistake and quite ended abruptly, but it was heartwarming family to me. I can feel their relationship well. Keep it up;
To:Natius
Haha, ikr. That's why I tried to reduce the speech and the formalities as much as possible. Glad you immersed in it!
Wholesome Romance that started from a suicidal girl? Now that's interesting.
Jun 01, 2023
Pretty nice start. Their personality are apparent and clearly described in a fun way. Way to go, author.
To:seanyori
Thank you, I tried to be as detailed as possible, while trying not to make the audience bored with the details. Glad you liked it.
It's interesting, not gonna lie. This chapter is off to a good start. I could feel the tension in the texts, it's great.
To:Steward McOy
Yeah, I tried to position myself as him, what I would do if I was enrolled because of a sports scholarship. I thought that I would be bored of long speeches, and with practice fatigue building up, I would save my energy for basketball practice instead. However, I knew that even with a sports scholarship, you can't fail the exams and still have to keep a passing grade. Hence I put this chapter to describe Keith Wallace's character and attitude, and how he deals with schools.