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A passionate game enthusiast who like to design game concepts, and story-writing at the same time. Loves writing engaging stories or serious, slow and interconnecting stories. For hire.
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Jun 03, 2023
To:Pearlyn.M
She is a honest and bold one for sure 😆
To:Kitsune
I glad you nostalgic with this. 😆
To:Makech
Hello, I implemented the changes you mentioned, plus a lot of others. I trimmed a lot, but she still ended up in the third chapter. This time, it's about three chapters of 1000 words instead of 1300-ish words chapters. I believe this is an improvement, but idk what else I could do to make her appear earlier. I hope this suffice.
Jun 02, 2023
Thank you very much! I'm going to delete or trim details from now on. Thanks again.👍
Interesting prologue. I could feel that the dream is immersive for the MC. I couldn't wait for the first chapter.
To:SoaringS
Yeah, me too, man, me too 😆
This is a split chapter from the original chapter 3, due to word limits and to add more details in them. I apologize for the confusion, and I hope you forgive me. Enjoy the concept
To:Natius
ROFL. I tried referring to American Burger due to, well, to signifies this is made using American styled (bread+patty+cheese+pickle+lettuce+ketchup+mayonnaise+thousand island)
Honestly, I wanted to refer carl's jr.'s burger, but that would lead me to copyright issue, hence "American" Burger 😆
To:Shulox
Thanks! I tried not to make them boring to readers too while trying to convey all the meanings. I glad you liked it.
To:Hunter Epicness
Yeh, we all hate lectures, but we all have to go through it. That's life for you😂
To:Glenville Seru
Thank you, I hope you enjoy them and read the continuations.
To:Magecrafter
Yeah, solid, boring, yet realistic, start... 😆
