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I'm not overdramatic but if you criticise me I will kill myself

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Mar 15, 2025

Dragging a man out of bed on a Saturday is a cardinal sin, Saturdays exist for doing nothing. Poor Aikami

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Chapter:18

Mar 13, 2025

Oh yeah, I think the bells already rung on this one. That scene under the cherry blossoms seems like Aikami has already fallen for her hopelessly. Maybe I'm calling it early but it feels like this contest was over before it began.

Chloe really is very endearing tho, it feels like everything she says and does is so earnest and genuine, I can't say I don't see exactly why the affection-starved Aikami would be completely taken with her. I may personally like Alice more but I can see this being the better ship

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Chapter:17

Mar 13, 2025

Damn, he's giving way more of a reaction to Chloe just being herself than he gave to Alice being openly flirty, seems like it's already over my number 1

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Chapter:16

Mar 13, 2025

“A guiding light for less civilised cultures,” oh man, where have I heard that one before lmao

Brushstrokes and Silver Blades

Chapter:8

Mar 10, 2025

To:bxnwin

Sorry but you wrote my perfect wife. If you don't want Alice to be popular you really shot yourself in the foot by making her unbeatable

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Chapter:15

Mar 10, 2025

To:bxnwin

I guess I'm looking at this through my own personal lens, and I have absolutely 0 respect for authority so I guess that's why I wouldn't think that way lol

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Chapter:14

Mar 10, 2025

Finally a character problem I can relate to. Trying to find accomodation for university fuckin sucks

What is 'love' in Japanese, Iwasaki-kun?

Chapter:0

Mar 10, 2025

Chloe's straightforward and ditzy nature is endearing, she's definitely a fun heroine. Her just casually showing up in his home and being confused when he's surprised is cute. I'm still pulling for Alice since I like her openly flirty and uninhibited attitude a little more, but Chloe is definitely a good choice too.

Side note, being instantly warped from roughly sea level to almost 4 kilometres up in the snow would be a *killer,* Aikami should thank his lucky stars that Chloe's stomach is stronger than her brain

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Chapter:15

Mar 10, 2025

Also I get the feeling he's thinking about this all the complete wrong way with the whole "of course they're insulted, a *mortal* talking down to a *goddess?*" thing. Sure, they drag him around and joke about cutting his thread, but it's not like they lord their divinity over him, it feels more like they want him to treat them like people

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Chapter:14

Mar 10, 2025

Oh no. Beset on all sides by three beautiful and openly flirtatious Goddesses who *all* seem to have some sort of fixation on him. The horror. Woe betide. Does he wanna switch places?

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Chapter:14

Mar 10, 2025

I can't decide if Garret is a great friend or a terrible one. On the one hand, most people would tell you you're a nutter for trying to dance the sideways tango with the most dangerous being in the world. On the other, most people would also act at least somewhat concerned if their friend was kidnapped in front of them

Screw It! If Fate Won't Let Me Score, At Least The Demon Lord Will!

Chapter:4

Mar 09, 2025

> Concordant is evil
> Concordant dislikes child labour
> Child labour is therefore good
The children yearn for the mines

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:19

Mar 08, 2025

Given the snide attitude and liberal use of the word "cunt," I wasn't sure whether to think of Arhonia as this world Britain or Australia. Now I know they're snooty about weapons, it has to be Britain. We turn our noses up at weaponry, but Aussies need them to fight off the weekly kangaroo invasions

Brushstrokes and Silver Blades

Chapter:7

Mar 08, 2025

To:otkrlj

Take care of yourself brother, worry about your own wellbeing above writing 🙏

Brushstrokes and Silver Blades

Chapter:6

Mar 08, 2025

Maybe it's just me but the chapters are starting to feel more and more jumpy and disjointed. It felt like last chapter ended on a cliffhanger, only for this one to completely switch gears to a different topic, give us a bunch of short intermediary scenes, and then get back to the cliffhanger. That's not an inherently bad thing but writing that way requires a lot of cohesion and I'm not sure this is it

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:18

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