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I'm not overdramatic but if you criticise me I will kill myself

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Mar 24, 2024

Sachiko's character evolution feels very natural and well done. The sudden crushing realisation that one isn't as specially as they once thought it portrayed great here, Sachiko's sudden breakdown feels like a very realistic response to that weight.

Both in terms of writing quality and overall enjoyment, she's definitely my favourite character. I know exactly what it's like to feel you're above everyone else, and I know exactly how it feels to be suddenly humbled, so I can really feel the thought put into that scene (can't say I know what it's like to be attracted to gross artificial humanoids, tho)

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:13

Mar 24, 2024

Sachiko when literally nothing is happening: "no, there's a time and place for these things and it's not here nor now"

Sachiko when the space station is leaking air: "hey Maeko, can I touch your tongue?"

I feel like this girl has a strange understanding of priorities

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:12

Mar 23, 2024

>Watersports Olympiad

Well that’s…. Certainly a picture.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:10

Mar 22, 2024

Sachiko: “hey, maybe you guys should actually help us on this mission that could decide the future of the entire species.”

Yanks and Russians: bomb the crap out of each other instead

Director: “Nice going Satch”

Leave my girl alone, she ain’t do nothin’ wrong

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:6

Mar 22, 2024

Sachiko seems rude, arrogant and unpleasant to be around. I think I love her.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:3

Mar 22, 2024

Man, poor Erika. That was just downright cruel. (Pretty funny though)

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:2

Mar 12, 2024

Big shout out to ArufaBeta for picking up the slack and writing an extra chapter. We had planned for seven, but a no show meant that were one person short. If Arufa hadn't volunteered to write two chapters, we'd have had to have rushed the ending far more.

And, of course, to the others who contributed too. Jon Spencer especially, for being the most active member of the discord and always offering his thoughts and advice when need's be.

It was a fun group project, and I'm more than happy with the result. So, good work team!

Charon's Legacy: The Clockwork Oracle

Chapter:7

Mar 12, 2024

I'll be honest, really not a fan of how the protagonist talks about this girl as if she's an item he gets as a reward instead of, like, a human being. If he's supposed to be an asshole that's fine, but he certainly doesn't come across as likeable

My crush was secretly the greatest heart surgeon.

Chapter:1

Mar 11, 2024

Ok so as the person who wrote this chapter, I would just like to clarify that the name "revelations" on a chapter about someone who found a way to revive from the dead is not supposed to imply that Savio is Jesus Christ. But I realised after I wrote it that it kinda seems that way and I thought it was really funny so I didn't change the chapter name

Charon's Legacy: The Clockwork Oracle

Chapter:6

Mar 09, 2024

To:Lucid Levia

"Suffocation due to having your face removed" has got to be one of the most awful ways to go

Charon's Legacy: The Clockwork Oracle

Chapter:5

Mar 05, 2024

To:Lucid Levia

All we're told about the scroll is that it takes your face if you look at it. We're not told what actually happens to your face.

Charon's Legacy: The Clockwork Oracle

Chapter:4

Mar 03, 2024

En passant checkmate? Holy hell!

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:1

Dec 28, 2023

Algernon is an uncommon name. Reference to “Flowers For Algernon?”

The Songstress of Avalon

Chapter:1

Dec 28, 2023

First chapter and I’m already loving this FeMC. Seems like she has a real no-bullshit attitude, a fun trait for a character to have. The lack of hesitation in just decking the spoilt Prince was super satisfying

The Songstress of Avalon

Chapter:0

Dec 28, 2023

Always love seeing another Isekai with an extremely verbose title. If it’s not an entire sentence I don’t wanna read it.

This hero guy seems like the quintessential unbearable asshole protagonist, especially forgetting about one his teammates for several days and only remembering her when he needs to blow the other three off for a little while. The comedic timing in that scene was pretty solid too.

It’s an interesting setup, definitely a good hook to get people on board. The concept feels pretty fresh, which is rare for the Isekai genre.

I’ll probably come back and read some more later. And I’d appreciate a read on my story, “Re: Born again as the strongest darkness mage in another world where my long lost childhood friend is my cute and bashful tsundere maid: romantic magical adventure with romance and magic! RE：異世界で誕生: Re:Born Re:Do Re:Write Re:Told Re:Constructed from Zero!”

Former Isekai Hero was Corrupted by His Over-Poweredness, and Now the People Need Me, a Prince of this World, to Defeat Him and Save Our Land

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