Jul 08, 2023

To:Lucid Levia

Honestly thank you for understanding and sharing all your writing thoughts with me 👍 I always appreciate it. I think a short break will help me recharge here and get things back on track.

Honestly the Faralinds are just 😭 sad feels. I'm glad the dad came across as somewhat sympathetic, if a little misguided! (I didn't want him to be too bad a guy, just maybe going about things the wrong way.) Mia will forgive him eventually, but not without a stern talking to first 😔

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 08, 2023

To:Blues01l

Honestly when you took a break that gave me the courage to ask for my own 💕 🫶 I'm glad we can inspire and help each other on here as fellow writers!! And super excited that you're still enjoying my silly story 🤣

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 08, 2023

To:Kitsune

Yeah, I think the one month mark is starting to catch up to a lot of writers. I was totally doing good until I...wasn't 🤣 Honestly it's a relief to hear others are feeling a bit burnt out too. If you need a bit of a break as well, please don't hesitate 💕 I think everyone will understand.
It stung a bit to realize I needed to do an edit 😭 but I want to accept and embrace these things, rather than continue on in the wrong direction for my story as a whole.
Mia's reaction to follow next chapter, along with a bit of character bonding time!!

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 08, 2023

To:Valentine

I wanted to include more of Jun's thoughts right there too, but I was running out of words 🤣 Next few chapters I plan to explore his feelings more! And how he feels about Toren in all this 🫶 thank you so much for reading!! 💕

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 08, 2023

To:Shulox

Sometimes in my head, a scene feels right...and then I read it later and go "What was I thinking??" 😭 This is the biggest challenge of this contest for me. Usually I spend months planning out my story, writing and editing, changing details. With this you guys are basically seeing my first draft 🤣 And sometimes. I got to admit to my mistakes and fix them 👍

Toren and Jun are EXTREMELY cute. And I may still think of Toren as the potential third love option if this was a dating sim 😏 but since I don't think Jun has any interest (sadly 🤣) then I want them to be good friends and support each other 💕 I'm glad this chapter could help brighten things up!!

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 08, 2023

To:Shulox

I think I have...over 60 in my library right now?? 😮 I uh, I may have gotten a little ahead of myself. I'm actually going to take a break this weekend to recharge 🤣 I realize I've been overworking myself and it's starting to impact my work (both writing and job.) Good luck on your finals!! I hope they go well! I would give you one of those Japanese "Luck with Studying" charms if I could!

I enjoy almost every book theme! What I look for in a story is more a certain voice of the author. I sometimes read the weirdest things, because the writing style is enjoyable and I can tell the author has a vision, and a respect for their craft. ❤️

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 08, 2023

To:Kaisei

🤣 you're figuring out my story threads, so much that I couldn't reply to this until today's chapter was posted.

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 08, 2023

Yo, it's been a stressful week! You'd think Holidays would be relaxing, right? 😆 I think all it did was throw me off schedule, and some of that stress got into my writing. (Thankfully, I have a trusted friend who helps me read this stuff, and lets me know when I've gone too far. Bless you, Amp 💕 you glorious person you. Imma order you pizza sometime ok?)

I'll be taking a short break from HoneyFeed, just to give my brain some reset time, because I want my writing quality to stay up!! 👍 I'll still lurk around and my posting schedule will be as usual, I just might comment and read stories a little slower. I'll be back fully on Tuesday you all have a great weekend!

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

8

Jul 08, 2023

Heilke is still distant and cold!! But I have a feeling things will change ☺️ just gotta give it time! August will get there!

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 08, 2023

To:IceDonut

We'll get back to your theory threads here soon 😏 we just have to explore Mia's situation a bit first.
I realized I kind of had Jun/Roki basically chasing after someone who was Amamiya's twin (in all practical sense) but not treating her like her own person, so that needed to be addressed! 💕

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 08, 2023

To:IceDonut

Okay well 🤣 you have a lot more of that right than you think!!! At least as my plan currently goes (there will be a bit of an in-between arc here coming up before we get to any of that, but still!) It is a similar idea, and honestly I'm glad readers can kind of guess at what's to come (so the ending will feel like what they want/expect) but I do have a few different angles in here to keep you guessing! I also have to make sure the story wraps up on time and doesn't get too complicated, so I'm going to simplify some of the multiverse stuff for that sake ☺️ still I love hearing your theories, and I'm glad this sparked your thoughts!!

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 07, 2023

Heyo! To anyone reading this now I changed some of this chapter 😅 the fight was a bit more than I wanted, so it was toned down. 💕 Thank you as always for reading and for the feedback!!

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

0

Jul 07, 2023

Ahaha I know the feeling of the phone going off...only for it to be an ad email 🤣 and not the text I was hoping would happen!

Seeing Jessica in the store after practice? 💕 A surprise, yes! But a welcome one!!

Ahahaha Keith 😂 Keith you are totally flirting with her!! I wonder if he realizes that or not? He may not really have much concept of what "flirting" looks like, if he hasn't dated at all up until now.

Hoping for Keith to make friends 😁

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

0

Jul 07, 2023

To:Kitsune

Yes the lack of sleep! 🤣 Actually me irl right now, but shhh, don't tell anyone. (I say in a public comment.)
It's a little bit of a disagreement between our duo, but one that will work out in time 💕 and yes!!! More Claire soon!! Also seriously thank you for the comment 🙏 It really cheered me up 💖

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1

Jul 07, 2023

To:Shulox

A 75.000 novel in one month?! 🤩 That is amazing still, even if you were aiming for 100k! I will definitely check it out when I have time.

...and speaking of time 😅 oh boy. Yes, you definitely have me there on the comments. I have been spending most of my free time reading and commenting lately. It's both for enjoyment (I really enjoy reading!) and because I feel a sense of responsibility to continue reading stories once I get started 🤣 It is getting to be a few too many novels in my library now...I may need to cut back, because I am running out of time in my day 😭

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

Loading...

1