Jul 07, 2023
I think you handled the dark topic really well!! ❤️🩹 And it feels nice to finally know a bit about Jack, and also have him embrace who he is (or at least, who he was.) The warning is good as-is 👍 and I'd say this segment isn't as dark as the last one, so it might not need too much of a warning.
Speeding too fast is something a lot of young drivers get into 😔 every time I hear a motorcycle going down the busy street near my house, waaay over the speed limit, I just hope they get to their destination safely. It's sad that Jack had to learn that lesson in the most tragic way...
But it also gives him a reason to keep going, and maybe a reason to return to Earth? If the girl he likes is in a coma, she might be alive!