Aug 22, 2023

SILVERIA GIVES A PERFECT 5 😭😭 but why do I feel like it was an insult more than anything? "Clown in her kingdom" 😭 silveria pls. I don't want to dislike a teenage girl but dang, Silveria is just >:(((( mrrghhhgh. (Please take this as a compliment 🤣 you have written a brilliantly condescending character 👍 and I love it!)

But Fantasia is leading in the beauty contest!!!! :D I am both happy that her inner beauty is showing, and worried that the more exposure she gets, the more people might bully her 😱

Skill competition time!! The part that's exciting 😁 oh I can't wait!

...wait Violet is literally using mind games 🤣 that has to be cheating. But no sell! The judges are too...judgy to care about following along with the game! 😆

Leanna about to do 1,000 pushups 🥹 and hold up this competition. Honestly thought she might be trying to buy time to stall the event for Fantasia's sake. But okay, Silveria is already bored by 30 🤣

"Prettiest soul in this world"? Leanna gets it 😌

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Aug 22, 2023

Ravel: Appearances DO matter but I CHALLENGE YOU ALL TO STAND UP AGAINST IT and be Non-Judgmental!
Silveria: bruh this is literally a beauty contest 😐 and I am a judge. 3 points.

🤣 I mean I still agree with Ravel in the end. Personally I don't think Beauty Contests should exist at all, but I believe I'd be in the minority of votes.

Zhang turning traitor? 😲 Or is he, uh, just not paying attention again? 🤣🤣

But FANTASIA IS HERE!!! And...oh my gosh Leanna is calling her "big sis" why does that make me so sentimental? 😭 I love the idea of Fantasia making more friends through her kindness ❤️

"A new pipe cutter" 🥹 Fantasia is a precious, pure soul and we must protect her.

Her answers are all beautiful, and it's wonderful to see her standing up for herself with each and every one. I just hope her words reached through to the crowd, because Fantasia's point of view could really challenge their perspective, heck, even their lives...and help them look at things a new way 🥺

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Aug 22, 2023

Moving in together!! 🥰 So cute, but of course the struggle of moving boxes strikes 🤣

A crystal ball 🔮 ooooh? Will we get to see the future? ✨

Proud battles in Luna's future? A battle to end wars, with glorious Luna at the helm? I know she'll be brilliant, whether it's an actual battle, or a more metaphorical challenge to join their two worlds!

Ooh and Walden's past life might return to have an impact on him? Through his artwork, perhaps? 😲
Hahaha okay, probably better to keep the scary crystal ball away now 🤣 but it had a good message about their love, so I hope Walden and Luna's relationship will keep them strong through life's trials!

IS WALDEN DRAWING THIS BOOK'S COVER ART? 😭😭😭 That is so cute!!!!

600 kinds of tea? Well, that's only two years worth if you take one a day! 🤭 don't worry Walden!!!

And yes, I think after the competition ends, these books can definitely have sequels and continuations! The 2021 winning entry "The Consequence of Saving the World" only had 30 chapters at the time of the contest, and now has 80. So you can definitely continue once the competition is over 👍 I hope to see what further adventures you make for them!!

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Aug 22, 2023

Somehow I fell behind reading and missed these uploads?! 😱 I was wondering why I hadn't seen a post in awhile and was like "Wait. I should go check." And yep!! I've got some finale to read! ❤️❤️❤️

Walden is the new Lunar Emperor. It's a big role to fill, but he's got time to learn! And I'm sure the previous Emperor, along with Luna, will be there to help him find his way 👍

And Charlie is the best man 😭 why does that make me emotional for some reason? They've come such a long way. The trials made them friends!!

Luna walking down the aisle looking like a beautiful princess -- no, a beautiful Queen 🥹 they grow up so fast!!
THEY'RE MARRIED 😭😭 Congrats, these two 👏👏👏 I hope they'll be happy together for all their days
(SEVEN HOUR ceremony?!?!! Gosh no wonder Walden is tired!)

Celebratory dinner at Charlie's place 🥂 ahaha! Mond and Master in maximum security prison? 👀 Why do I feel like they could definitely escape if there's a sequel novel?

And finally back to Walden's original house, where this journey all began. this was an adorable ending and I really enjoyed it!! 👏👏🎉 I hope you are super proud because this is such an achievement, and it's awesome to finish a story!!!! 🎊🎊
(Now, bonus chapter? 👀)

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Aug 22, 2023

A blonde boy at the register, and no uncle yet! I wonder if Ryu will become a ramen senpai? :D or maybe...ramen enemy? 🤣 It seems like he and Neo don't get along!

But Neo is getting into the waiter role and shouting IRASSHAIMASE!!! with all of his heart! 😁 With the baseball crew teasing him about it, of course.

Hmm, Neo not participating in the championship 🤔 he must have his reasons. I know the baseball team is upset, but extra respect to Takeshi for standing up for Neo's decision! (Takeshi slowly becoming my second favorite boy 🤭 next to Neo of course!)

Saya is here!!! :D Yesss! Always glad to see her have a chance to visit with Neo, and see him in new ways!

Festival coming up soon? Oooh? I hope Neo won't have to work the whole time, because maybe he can visit the festival with Saya! 🏮 🎊

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Aug 22, 2023

Neo is calm and ready for these tests! He knows he's studied all he can, and he's going to do his best 👍 Also Neo getting treats from Saya for his injury is adorable!! 🤭

Wonder where Len is wondering off to at such early and late hours 🤔

But the week of tests is over, and Neo's leg has healed! Now it's time for a much deserved relaxation break! ....or walking into Len with Neo only wearing a towel 🤣 ahaha! I can agree, it is hard to get used to a roommate after living alone for awhile.

Neo sleeps like a cat 👀 hehe 🐈 I still imagine him very cat-like, even if the story has changed! ❤️

And now Neo is on a mission to search after Len 🕵️ Detective Neo! ...a mountain 🏔️? Training in the mountains? 😲

Neo admits that he loves Saya!! 🤭 But that much Len could already figure out... 🧐 These questions about Mia though, hmmm!!!

Ahahaha okay, "Trust being built over time" was good. But then Neo with the "If you let me punch you in the face, I'll trust you more" was amazing!!! 🤣🤣🤣 Neo just wanted to test him, but that was still hilarious!

"if you actually do betray me I really will punch you" 👊 👀 Neo is fantastic and I almost want him in a mafia story now 😂

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Aug 22, 2023

As someone who has a bad ankle myself, I'm very glad Hoshi school has an elevator 🤣 (It's a small detail but I liked it!!)

LEN AND SUNNY!!!! OOOOHHhhh that's what you meant by fire and ice, sun and moon. Honestly they are perfect together 🤭 and Len is more of a refined gentleman than I thought! (Also, Len noticed Neo was looking at Saya? Hehe, maybe Len realizes Neo's crush!!)

Eeeee Neo and Saya got their picture in the school paper! 🥺 Okay that is so cute.

"Teach me, oh great sage 🙏" was also such a good line, it made me laugh 🤣🤣 English is SO difficult!! But okay, math is too.

Okay, Len definitely *knows* 👀 now the question is, will Len try to interfere, or help Neo and Saya be together?

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Aug 22, 2023

To:Katsuhito

Did you only want one world for your isekai? I'm sorry, how about, ALL the worlds? :D And maybe even, BEYOND THE WORLD! 👍👍
Honestly I love writing about non-euclidean spaces, and absolutely messing with physics/gravity. At some point, I'll write a story that goes full-Inception. But for today, we just get dizzying Officeroom Beyond Time 🤣
Poochy (best doggo boy) brought a box!! And your guess as for what's inside...isn't too far off ;)
ONLY 38 CHAPTERS IN. BUT WE FINALLY GOT A KISS FOLKS. We finally got the kiss and the confession!! To be honest, for a story that entirely centered around love and romance, I almost feel like I'm late to the party 🤣
TRANSCEND MY BRO. TRANSCEND. And get ready to TRANSCEND MORE on Thursday. 😤

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Aug 22, 2023

To:Lucid Levia

HEY WHAT'S UP EVERYBODY? It's ya boy, Junoroki, here LIVE at the SPACE CONVENTION! Be sure to drop a THUMBS UP! Alright let's see what costumes we can see here already. There's a mermaid thing. Maybe an orc. Ooooh look at this dragon! Guys it looks like a REAL dragon--[chomped]

For real, without Galinnade and poochy as the MVPs, our MC might've gotten uh 🤣 dragon roasted? But at this point, Jun is in the realm of "literally the room directs you where you need to go" so I did make use of that to speed things along here xD

And YES! Finally a confession, because we're getting close to the end here and it's time to just help these love-struck idiots realize they love each other.

Champions: [literally saying nothing]
Champions: [literally nothing at ALL]
Claire: Jun you wanna kiss?
Jun: I have waited 38 chapters for this. I do not care that creepy eldritch horror beings are watching. HECK YEAH.

...imagine if this was how the plot of Ouran High School Host Club ended 🥹

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Aug 22, 2023

To:Funsui

Not going to lie, I threw that dragon in there because of your "No date!" chapter. I was inspired!! xD Poochy's given a random box! It will turn out to be very useful next chapter indeed <333
All kinds of things in this chapter, some more of the Champions of the Void, and finally Jun and Claire getting to TALK ABOUT THEIR FEELINGS AND LOVE AND--And yep, Claire is making the first move with that kiss <3 She's not waiting another 500 years! x)

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Aug 22, 2023

To:Valentine

Mermaid is like "Yep, she's probably dead" and Jun has a moment of "Noooooooo!!!!" 😭😱😱😱
(Truthfully, I just wanted to explain why Claire and Jun could both talk to mermaid-chan, and they wouldn't have been there at the exact same time. Because timing-wise, for Jun to bust into the courtroom when he did, he and Claire would have both been in the "waiting room" with similar timing. So uh. I decided to bend time a bit.)

Honestly, Shadow's House is a favorite of mine, and imagining Ribbon-chan as Barbara/Barbie would be such a cool interpretation. I was thinking something more traditionally Japanese-doll looking 🤔 (long black hair, porcelain skin, red ribbons tying up the hair, nearly expressionless) but I don't mind her character being open to interpretation, because she's one of my more non-human characters whose design changes in my mind every time I go to write. 🤣

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Aug 22, 2023

To:Henrico

I have a bit of a love triangle in my story, and I think it is okay to include one as long as it does not become a long dramatic thing that turns into a telenovela 😆 I believe the "wholesome" is mostly to eliminate telenovela extreme-drama level writing.

And please take care of yourself too!! We are in the last few weeks of the contest so I know it is difficult. But sleep is good, and keeps the mind going!

And yes!! Bruno actually noticed I wrote some comments em espanhol e português, and he asked if I knew other writers who spoke the language! 👍 I think it is awesome to share connections!! And I would love for your story to get more readers! 😁

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Aug 22, 2023

To:Henrico

The dancing scene was one of my FAVORITES so far (along with Futura 😍) just because I loved how you overlapped Neo dancing at the party, along with his childhood memories of dancing. And it was a really cute scene with the mom ❤️ even if that scene might become happy-sad if the mom is no longer around, I still really liked it!!

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Aug 22, 2023

To:Henrico

Noooo! No sadness! I'm sorry, it really just has been busy! 😭 I work a full time job, on top of trying to get my story finished, and also lately there has been some family drama taking up my time (as well as me trying to job search for a new job TT___TT I think I just came home a few days ago and fell asleep on my couch without eating dinner!)

But I really do like your story!! And I want to read and support! :D I have a bit more time now that my last few chapters are drafted. So now I can focus on editing and reading!

I actually really like the simplicity of the cover art, I think it makes it stand out! And the silhouette is mysterious~
I am also a huge fan of stars 🤣 So you already have me as a fan just from that alone!! Hoshi star theme is awesome!!! 🌟

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Aug 21, 2023

Sad Ru 😭 but he has the right to be sad. He lost his grandpa 💔 he might need to grieve for awhile 😢 but at least Yada and Baba give him a reason to get out of bed, even if just to provide them a little bit of food.

ヽ(°〇°)ﾉ
THE GARDEN IS IN FLAMES??
Noooo!!! But he worked so hard on it! They all worked so hard on it! is everyone okay?! Are the Koi okay?! 😢😢😢

Wait wait Vikings, Aztecs, Dragons? Is this a dream? 😲 None of this was real? It was all a story??? Oooooohhh the twist!

Is this the real Ru now? A writer? He's the one who was like Yada 😭 lying on a beanbag in the yard, lost because of the passing of his grandfather. Wait...Momo is his girlfriend? And Momo used to be like this too?

Is Momo...his Yada-chan? 🥹
"He never gave up on me. Now it's my turn to do the same for him"
❤️❤️❤️

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