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~ minatika ~ she/her I use too many emojis 👍
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Aug 21, 2023
To:Deleted User
I'll admit, Galinnade was just a random character for this scene, but I ended up liking her more than I thought! xD I was going to have a nameless clerk, but that ended up getting confusing without having a proper name or pronouns the longer the scene went on, so Galinnade was born! Thankfully, it's not just admin work for eternity, she gets to watch over worlds and hang out with Poochy x) while seeing things like Claire's adventures play out.
I wanted to show the World Breakers existing beyond time, as a whole mash-up of worlds and beings, so it wouldn't just be a human-focused officeplace xD Am I inspired a bit by more Western Multiverse stories here? Definitely ;)
To:Funsui
Just another day at work, as the Eldritch Gods send more paperwork and world breakers her way!! xD And Claire sending you Hot Singles ads! As the people beyond fate and time do. POOCHY IS TOTALLY STEALING BABA'S TREATS. I can confirm. Poochy will be protected and we will love him forever. I was going to just have him be a one-off event to make this scene a bit brighter, but everyone is loving him so much I think Poochy will have to return. (And maybe befriend Toren? Cat Boy and Dog Friend?) OBJECTION!!!! Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney at World Breaker Law, is here to challenge this courtroom! xDDD I realize this chapter goes a bit more fantastical and crazy than my previous, but I really wanted the World Breakers to feel "otherworldly" and "chaotic neutral" more than any kind of rigid godly system or anything. So, things got a bit crazy!! x)
I'll see if I can fit Poochy into the maid outfit drawing ;) and yep, Toren's Tanabubu was a must uvu ❤️
To:Memo Alfonso
I wanted to give Mia her time to shine!! 👏 She's a strong character on the inside, and I really wanted to show that to the readers. 💪 And this was such a fun chapter to write!! "Delicacies from the Forest of the Rising Sun" is maybe one of my favorite hidden puns I've put into this story 😂
Claire, of course, being the true hero in the background, with that grocery store sauce!!! Don't worry, Claire will be joining the party soon 😉
The description was really fun to write for this chapter, and I'm so glad the festive mood got across!!! 😍 Writing festivals is one of my favorite things!
👀 and I see you commented on the next chapter. You definitely found out how things go with our fool of a duke here! xD
To:hmt5u
What do you mean there aren't supposed to be Eldritch Terrors and Lap Pillow Fantasies in the same chapter? 👀 ⭐ ✨ (Jun was totally thinking about that Claire lap pillow.)
The foreshadowing about Claire's magic is folded into the chapters early on, each section revealing a little bit, leading up to this. I realized I'd teased a lot at Claire's magical powers, and needed to address them properly! The fact that she can isekai people across worlds and summon WacDonalds from anywhere was starting to stand out, especially when so far in Farelle, there hasn't been much magic at all 🤣
Roki casually just raising "I'm not an elf" flags 👀 I swear Mia's letting him get away with it, when most other characters wouldn't.
Honestly, I wanted to include more of Jun's backstory sooner, but never found a good place to fit it in the narrative until now. I wanted to show just a little of the home life that made him who he is, and explain why he's so impulsive and a bit blinded to reality. It's a light characterization (I don't want to go overboard and give Jun a giant trauma-dump background 😆 he's mostly a normal guy) but I realized we needed to know a little more about Jun <3
Claire's just like "Wait I missed it??? Noooo D:" 🤣
To:dmz
🙏 It's so true. I thought about writing their fight scene and then realized...the reader can already guess how Mia and her dad's conversation will go. There's no need to show it, and bring the scene down with that. Better to focus on the more interesting part!! Like screaming at bamboo 🤣
Yeah, I have considered putting a "shoujo" tag on this story, but I'm not quite sure if it really qualifies? It's on the borderline. I'm not going to go full "magical roses and ikemen sparkles" like the Rose of Versailles, but there's still a shoujo theme (certainly more than shonen at least.)
Strong execution is where I try to stand out!! and make a twist on some usual plot elements / cliches. The culprit might've been a bit obvious (since there's only so many characters) but I tried to put a spin on it~ 👍
Shhhhhh 👀 you're predicting my story a little too close to the correct truth. Hehe~
To:Naru_Sheny
Thank you!! Honestly, hearing that you think it's beautifully crafted is such a large compliment ❤️ I've tried my best to fit in so many balancing plot threads, and weave it all together into something that (I hope) comes across as good writing!!
As for Claire's parallel selves...well~ There's certainly a few more parallels here than just Mia/Ama, I'll say that much 😉 but it might not be who you expect!
To:Taylor J
Currency set-up was indeed a large part of this chapter! I tried to fit in world-building along with the scenes, rather than trying to explain things in long paragraphs of exposition. (Always trying to "show" rather than "tell" with my worldbuilding, but it's tricky!)
More predictions? 👀 Always my favorite!! ❤️ But the ending...well~ That's just to let you know this won't be just a simple slice-of-life plotline 😉 there's more going on here than meets the eye!
To:Micro
The story direction will change a bit here in the beginning, but will start to show its true path in a few chapters! 👍 A major focus is Jun's character growth, and how that impacts the characters around him. (And Claire's motivations, well, let's just say...they're going to be a part of the big mystery that makes this whole story keep going~ ) I'd love to see you around!! And thank you so much for checking out my story!
Aug 20, 2023
To:Raya
Thank you! And, please focus on your own story first!! It is a lot of work to try to finish your story before September 👍 and I hope you can do it!!
You just happened to catch me while I was online and in the middle of reading your chapters 🤣 I do not usually do so much back and forth commenting! And I certainly don't expect you to read my novel in return 👍
I'm just reading a bit right now before I go to sleep! I'm excited to read the next few chapters in the morning 😆
The blanket and cute bandages are absolutely adorable 💕 Sakura is precious ❤️❤️ And she's right to be scared 🥺 her husband really was in a dangerous situation.
But it looks like the date is happening!!! Yay! :D they get to go to the Seaside and El Amor restaurante~ or...well...that was the plan.
But here comes the car accident 😭 I'm hoping they both end up going to the isekai together and they can find each other again!!
and make a twist on some usual plot elements / cliches. The culprit might've been a bit obvious (since there's only so many characters) but I tried to put a spin on it~ 👍
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