Jul 12, 2023

To:Lihinel

Shit, translation mistake, already fixed it. I write the story originally in Spanish and then translate each chapter, but somehow I got the names mixed in the last part. In Spanish, Spud's name is "Pat", short for "Patata", which means potato. Sorry for the confusion!

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Jul 10, 2023

To:SarahLynn

Thank you hahaha I mostly agree but here are tons of really good isekai stories!

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Jul 10, 2023

To:Chika san

Thank you! I hope other people think the same too <3

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Jul 10, 2023

To:Wolliven

I'm glad you liked it!!

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Jul 10, 2023

To:SarahLynn

I'm writing with that in mind, but the type of story I want to craft can't be all funny dialogue and light action. I hope you don't find this too obnoxious!

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Jul 10, 2023

To:Wolliven

Thank you, as always! I appreciate that you keep on reading <3

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Jul 10, 2023

To:Chika san

You will see it in the next chapters, but I promise you that you are going to see her vulnerable!

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Jul 10, 2023

To:Pearlyn.M

I wanted to name him Potato but the abbreviation was "Pot" and that didn't sound right at all hahahaha

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Jul 10, 2023

To:josh888

Thank you!!!

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Jul 10, 2023

To:Neitiri

Thanks! I know descriptions and exposition are not my strengths, but I really enjoy writing dialogues!

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Jul 10, 2023

To:Dissartist

Thanks for your comment. I hope you like the next chapters! <3

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Jul 10, 2023

To:SarahLynn

I hope you find it interesting!!

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Jul 10, 2023

To:Feuzy

Thanks! :3

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Jul 10, 2023

To:Chika san

I wouldn't say dominate. I'd love to explain deeper character motivations, but I can't just go posting spoilers in the comments hahaha

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Jul 10, 2023

To:Neitiri

They will, I promise hahaha

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