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I know that I'm never going to be successful in the writing scene, there's so many of us, and Chat GPT was the final nail in the coffin. Either way, I'm fucked, so I'm just going to write weird cool shit
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May 03, 2024
To:doo78
Its a matter of national security, not even god could of predicted their power
Apr 12, 2024
Thanks dude
Mar 14, 2024
Pretty good. The cover picture is cute and catches your attention. The best part about this is that you didn't waste anytime getting to the point, the prose didn't feel to flowery or bloated, and overall its was a fun and efficient first chapter.
Mar 12, 2024
To:Kirb
Thank you for the feedback. I wanted to portray a younger person who is quite childish and he is on a sort of delirium from his health conditions, so he's not thinking straight. I hope you'll give him a chance, thank you for reading.
Mar 05, 2024
Wow, what an intense chapter! Rin and Yukeno's reactions felt so real as they navigated through the chaos of prom night. The unexpected twist at the end had me on the edge of my seat! The way you described the horrifying events unfolding at the prom massacre was truly chilling. And then, Rin's journey into this mysterious new world? Intriguing! The introduction of Revolution World and the Primal Weapons adds a whole new layer of excitement to the story. Can't wait to see where Rin's adventure takes him next! Keep up the great work!
Hey there! Just finished reading your chapter, and I must say, I was hooked from the very beginning! Your description of the protagonist's inner struggle and the vivid portrayal of their new surroundings really drew me in. It's refreshing to see such relatable characters facing challenges that many of us can relate to. And I couldn't help but chuckle at the sushi mishap – reminds me of a similar mix-up my own family had once. Looking forward to reading more and seeing how the story unfolds! Keep up the fantastic work!
Nov 29, 2023
To:J.P.B
Thanks, next I'm thinking of doing a fucked up murder mystery.
