Dec 16, 2024
The fact that Marsia's mother called her a precious treasure instead of daughter to their guests says their whole dynamic in a nutshell. She's not seeing her as her child. She sees her as an object that she can control over... that's just sad 😭
So it seems like Marsia also realizes that time is weird, and the memory switch happened here again. Its almost like the main characters are constantly shifting between two parallel worlds, which would explain the Schrodinger's Cat theory. I could stick with this theory for now, but even im not too sure on that lol
Also, i cant really ignore the comment section so I'll say this: I honestly like the story so far (since i AM a huge mystery fan)! If there's anything that I should share, it's that I don't quite see any hints of Arufa's and Skyler's backstories or personal goals yet, BUT this is barely chapter 6 and I assume you'll sprinkle bits/expand on them in later chapters. It's already challenging enough to switch between povs when we could've seen some downtime, but i think saving it for later is totally fine.
I do want to hold off on my opinion of this mystery since it's quite sophisticated to be judged so early on. For what im seeing now, there's plenty of questions and no explanations yet. This is just my observations and not a critique tho lol im sure we'll see lots of more clues later on, and I'll do a proper review after the mystery gets solved lol
ANYWAY Dont take me too seriously tho im just ur average web novel writer who barely started like 2 years ago and im the "the cup is half full" type of person lmao. Keep up the good work!
