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Garlimana

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Writer and reader testing the waters of publishing my writing online.

registered at: Jun 13, 2023

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Jun 24, 2023

He has been begarbled! The tragedy! A new interface must be constructed!

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:6

Jun 23, 2023

Family schmamily, gotta get in touch with Brian and that one guy I can't name for the life of me.

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:4

Jun 23, 2023

"Better to pretend to be a different person than be alone." I get it, especially at that age. Hopefully they make progress on that front, because it sucks trying to be someone else just to please others.

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:3

Jun 23, 2023

Down she falls, and interactions are compelled to continue

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:2

Jun 23, 2023

To:Kaisei

He wants to understand and get along with everyone so badly! Maybe things will start making sense to him soon?

The Mosaic Night

Chapter:3

Jun 22, 2023

Get em', Vivian. With your newfound extra stamina point, anything should be possible! Lol.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:5

Jun 22, 2023

Thank the goddess for Stefan, and for hope of communication!

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:4

Jun 20, 2023

Loving it. I'm really interested in seeing how he copes with, or finds a way to solve, the issue with inefficiency. It seems like Vivian is going to have a lot do deal with soon, so hopefully he figures out how to start helping her soon.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:3

Jun 19, 2023

Nice, methodical start that really establishes the character and general setting, immersing the reader quickly in the world. I like it! You've got a knack for getting characterization out there right off the bat, and in a way that doesn't feel like you're droning on.

The Lies We Live (Part 1): Journey's First Light

Chapter:1

Jun 19, 2023

To:Kaisei

Thank you for saying so! I debated back and forth about trying to grab people immediately with some kind of action scene, but ultimately I like to take things slow and let them unfold a bit more, so going at a slow and retrospective-feeling pace from the beginning just felt right. Happy reading and writing!

The Mosaic Night

Chapter:0

Jun 18, 2023

Killer hook, lovely premise, and a lot potential left open to explore the world and the MCs. I can't wait to eat it all up over the coming months. Happy writing!

On the run with a witch from another world

Chapter:1

Jun 18, 2023

Absolutely excellent. I am enthralled. Kyle is a man after my own heart, in a way, even though I am nowhere near as obsessed as him with my own fixations. I must know his fate.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:1

Jun 18, 2023

To:HVM

Thank you for commenting, and also for the note! Sometimes its hard to get out of your own head, since you know the characters, so I hadn't realized it'd be hard to tell them apart there. I'll edit those in shortly!
I'm also excited to check out your novel, as the synopsis seems right up my alley.

The Mosaic Night

Chapter:1

Jun 18, 2023

Even the stones play skyrim...

The world's toughest little golem.

Chapter:2

Jun 18, 2023

Love the hook, and I'm also interested in how this kind of character will presumeably react to becoming inhuman. Now I'm on to chapter 2, so keep it up!

The world's toughest little golem.

Chapter:1

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