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Writer and reader testing the waters of publishing my writing online.
Jun 28, 2023
"My, how sad that you live here like this. And you desperately wish to have Vivian understand you? Oh, how unfortunate. That must be so difficult for you." "But you could just tell her, couldn't you? I mean, you can talk to her out there right now, right?" "Hm? Sorry, I didn't hear you. Good luck, my lovestruck little friend."
To:SkeletonIdiot
Thank you for saying so, and nice icon by the way!
An unfamiliar ceiling... I like the classic start, and coming right out with the MC's admission to the maid that he has no idea what any his surroundings are. Keep it up, I look forward to seeing where you take it!
To:Syed Al Wasee
I get that, and I'll certainly be revising the prolouge a few times over the coming months. Thanks for the comments!
Jun 27, 2023
"Could she dissect me and wiggle around my insides?" Kyle, honey, she may do that, but...
Diane has entered your room, huh?
At some point, the Luck will *surely* come around enough that she'll suddenly be able to understand all of the good advice he's trying to give her, right? Right? Isn't that how it works? Ah... But, Diane! Surely this new ray of hope will have the perfect advice!
To:Kaisei
It's all a matter of perspective, ain't it? Magic vs. technology, people you've known your whole life vs. an entire world of strangers who go about entirely different lives than yours... we'll just have to see what she thinks of all of it.
Jun 26, 2023
To:HVM
I've grown pretty attached to writing fantasy worlds and creatures over the last few years, some more dangerous or harsh than others, so its nice writing a pure fantasy realm where I can just explore some positive relationships for once with kindly inhuman beings. Hope this one pays off in the end, in a satisfying way for all of us!
Jun 25, 2023
Hey, if you're not allowed to get in good with the law, you've got no choice but to turn to the underground. Why not buddy up with some thieves in a mutual exchange to get what you need? I mean, there's the risk that they'll turn on you the moment they get what they want, being thieves and all, but depending on what world you've stumbled in to maybe most of em' are thieves-with-a-heart-of-gold. Why not play the odds?
Ahh! There goes the smooch! Words are unnecessary, just a lil' smooch says it all. ❤️
You been blue-lipped, it's a tale as old as time. Now look at the pebbles and smile along. Smile, dammit, like your life depends on it, because it does! You need to learn the age-old art of pebble shot!
Its always jarring to hear stories about yourself that you don't remember at all, especially when you're only *just* inclined to think they might be true. Wonder about Ricardo's veracity.
I'm dying. Kyle has such a good heart, but he's also such a fool. I'm rooting for him, and Vivian, though. He'll get through to her somehow, even if this might not work as well as he hopes it will! (≧∇≦)/❤️
To:Harmonica Writes
Thank you for your wonderful feedback! The plot should start hopping more soon, so I hope you enjoy. I'm used to writing novel-style works that most people never see, all built in little worlds I wanted to explore personally, so I feel like a lot of that bled over here into me wanting to thoroughly establish the setting in a way that feels intriguing. Happy reading!
Jun 24, 2023
Time to learn a new language from scratch, Kyle. Its not like you've got much else to do, huh? A simple message will suffice at first.