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I am a programmer who pretends to be an author at night time. You can see my published books on my website (as Nicholas Bleak) Thank you for reading!

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Aug 30, 2026

To:dairyfree

Koharu is a good kid… but she had a lot going on back then…

Happy Forever Alone

Chapter:2

Aug 30, 2026

To:dairyfree

Thank you! There are plenty of bad people, buts hopefully Aiko keeps meeting the good ones like this old guy.

Happy Forever Alone

Chapter:4

Aug 30, 2026

To:dairyfree

Thank you so much!

Happy Forever Alone

Chapter:1

Aug 28, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

Haha, yeah. The plot gods would never let things be resolved so easily!

Happy Forever Alone

Chapter:2

Aug 25, 2026

To:Nuru-Y-23Ultra

Thank you!

Happy Forever Alone

Chapter:1

Aug 22, 2026

To:Mario Nakano 64

Thanks Mario that’s good advice! It’s nice to see you again too!

Happy Forever Alone

Chapter:1

Sep 11, 2023

Woohoo! Congratulations on finishing! Sorry for the last few chapters I just focused on reading rather than commenting - I wanted to get through what was left in one sitting.

Quite an interesting story!

I really liked the football elements and how it made a nice backdrop for the romantic element.

The time travel and trip to the underworld were certainly not expected, though I appreciate there were some hints to the time travel stuff earlier on.

Over all I enjoyed reading it - it was a fun read and I was satisfied by the dummy and the tanuki winding up together 😊

Of course I could give you plenty of feedback but I think, like most of the competition entries, they are really more like first drafts, so maybe it isn’t good to go into details. For now the most important point is I enjoyed it and you got to the end and it’s something to be proud of!!

Well done! Best of luck in the competition!!

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:46

Sep 07, 2023

To:kazesenken

Thanks for reading the whole thing!

Yeah that xp system needs tuning. It's funny, but it's way too aggressively shitty for readers to feel satisfied - especially for a litrpg style isekai.

Strong agree about isekai. Lots of people regard it as trash tier but I like it. It's fun. I mean I'm all for serious fantasy world-building epic whatever, but if it doesn't have a slime monster poking at boobs, then really what's the point? 🤷🏼‍♀️

Thanks again for reading all the way though. Glad to hear it was a fun read 😁

Working For A Level 1 Demon Lord In Another World

Chapter:16

Sep 07, 2023

To:kazesenken

I kind of feel everybody's eye pops at some point in that arc. I read a whole bunch of it, but rage quit after Kirito vanished for 3 volumes and one whole book was a giant battle between people I didn't care about - at least that's how I remember it 😂

It would be nice if Souma could just delete that part of the code, and spend the rest of his days doing that whole "slow life" thing I keep hearing about.

Working For A Level 1 Demon Lord In Another World

Chapter:15

Sep 06, 2023

To:kazesenken

Let me unleash my op demon lord and squash you all. Then it’s off to start making my harem!

Or yeah, alternatively they all die. About equal odds I reckon.

Working For A Level 1 Demon Lord In Another World

Chapter:14

Sep 06, 2023

To:kazesenken

A big part of it is probably opportunity - more mobs in dungeons - but mostly I just scaled the XP to be overly harsh for Souma. After I finished the book and looked back it felt a little too harsh. It kind of became a running gag, but the stakes of the world don’t quite align. When I get around to editing this, the XP and leveling will be a little more accessible (I mean, the numbers will go up a little faster. Souma and Selina will still be just as useless).

Thanks for reading!

Working For A Level 1 Demon Lord In Another World

Chapter:13

Sep 04, 2023

To:kazesenken

There is an actual answer that, and it is: anyone participating in the actual battle gets XP split evenly between them, rounded down - but they need to take part in the fight and not just be close by. XP is technically all recorded by the system, but there are limits to what these kids can see.

Also Ruka probably is most likely to kill Tenka in his sleep. Also most likely to kill _anyone_ in their sleep though...

Thanks so much for reading kazesenken. I started reading Why Kill and the first chapter was a literal horny blast.

Working For A Level 1 Demon Lord In Another World

Chapter:12

Sep 04, 2023

To:kazesenken

I can picture Souma frantically trying to find a fallen "magic stone" or something.... 😆

I don't think these wolf mobs even _have_ drops... Unless they ate a coin by mistake. 🤔

Working For A Level 1 Demon Lord In Another World

Chapter:11

Sep 04, 2023

To:kazesenken

🤣 Definitely the next spell Souma needs to learn is light healing or cure or something. Current instructions: stay out of the way at the back and hold your big stick.

Working For A Level 1 Demon Lord In Another World

Chapter:10

Sep 04, 2023

To:kazesenken

Reiny definitely has reasons. I'm sure nobody would willingly stick with such an annoying duo without good cause.... 😆

Working For A Level 1 Demon Lord In Another World

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