Sep 11, 2023
Woohoo! Congratulations on finishing! Sorry for the last few chapters I just focused on reading rather than commenting - I wanted to get through what was left in one sitting.
Quite an interesting story!
I really liked the football elements and how it made a nice backdrop for the romantic element.
The time travel and trip to the underworld were certainly not expected, though I appreciate there were some hints to the time travel stuff earlier on.
Over all I enjoyed reading it - it was a fun read and I was satisfied by the dummy and the tanuki winding up together 😊
Of course I could give you plenty of feedback but I think, like most of the competition entries, they are really more like first drafts, so maybe it isn’t good to go into details. For now the most important point is I enjoyed it and you got to the end and it’s something to be proud of!!
Well done! Best of luck in the competition!!
