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Hello Everyone! I'm a lover of all things horror, and can't go a day without writing or reading! My dream is to be a published author, so hopefully being on Honeyfeed will help. Thanks in advance for reading my work!
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Oct 24, 2023
Always nice to see supportive parents. This was a cute chapter.
It feels very believable. You're doing a great job 👍
To:Ramza Beoulve
Thank you 😊
Oct 23, 2023
To:SkeletonIdiot
Thank you for reading it! It was the first idea that I thought of!
Thank you for writing it. Good luck with the contest!
This was very good! You have a couple of typos, but the idea of multiple Eros and Thanatos is a cool concept. Nicely done.
That was a cute cliffhanger.
Oct 22, 2023
This was very good. I love how the ending is bittersweet and open to interpretation!
I love the group dynamic so far. And I agree, reading light novels is better than reading manga for their research. This chapter feels believable. Nicely done!
To:Ella Louis Davis
Thank you! I wanted to tell her side of the story, since we only saw the guy's perspective.
Oct 21, 2023
This was very cute. But who's the woman in her twenties? Is she a house keeper? This is my favorite chapter so far!
Oct 20, 2023
To:Guilherme Carvalho
I can't wait to see it unfold! I love stories like this. Good luck with the contest, and I'll keep reading!
I smell a mystery brewing! The only thing that doesn't make sense to me is the MCs age. If he's 14 then shouldn't he be in middle school? And the idea that all have to write a novel together without knowing who the publisher is, is also a little strange. They can't do research and see what the publisher specializes in, or what's popular. I do like where the plot is going, though.
Oct 19, 2023
To:Doremine
I agree that leaving some scenes to interpretation can be very fun, and I see what you mean. In Greek mythology, Thanatos is more like a guardian to the Doors of Death, so stopping time even for a few seconds can easily be in his toolset. Nice job!
I agree with what they said, but I do like the idea of Thanatos answering her prayers. The one scene that confused me was, why didn't the doctor do anything? Wasn't he right there on the roof with her? Other than that, this wasn't a bad read. Nicely done.