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Hello Everyone! I'm a lover of all things horror, and can't go a day without writing or reading! My dream is to be a published author, so hopefully being on Honeyfeed will help. Thanks in advance for reading my work!
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Oct 22, 2023
To:Harmonica Writes
Thank you for messing with my emotions lol😆
I love the group dynamic so far. And I agree, reading light novels is better than reading manga for their research. This chapter feels believable. Nicely done!
To:Ella Louis Davis
Thank you! I wanted to tell her side of the story, since we only saw the guy's perspective.
Oct 21, 2023
This was very cute. But who's the woman in her twenties? Is she a house keeper? This is my favorite chapter so far!
Oct 20, 2023
To:Guilherme Carvalho
I can't wait to see it unfold! I love stories like this. Good luck with the contest, and I'll keep reading!
I smell a mystery brewing! The only thing that doesn't make sense to me is the MCs age. If he's 14 then shouldn't he be in middle school? And the idea that all have to write a novel together without knowing who the publisher is, is also a little strange. They can't do research and see what the publisher specializes in, or what's popular. I do like where the plot is going, though.
Oct 19, 2023
To:Doremine
I agree that leaving some scenes to interpretation can be very fun, and I see what you mean. In Greek mythology, Thanatos is more like a guardian to the Doors of Death, so stopping time even for a few seconds can easily be in his toolset. Nice job!
I agree with what they said, but I do like the idea of Thanatos answering her prayers. The one scene that confused me was, why didn't the doctor do anything? Wasn't he right there on the roof with her? Other than that, this wasn't a bad read. Nicely done.
This was a beautifully uplifting story. Very well done.
To:Lihinel
Oh, I didn't know that. I knew it was linked to the last updated story. I'm sure I liked yours though. All of the entries I've read have been wonderful. Good luck with the MalxHF contest, and I'll read yours soon!
I haven't found yours yet. I did click your link and it shows an isekai story. Which I also plan to read. I did notice a few entries that feel closer to the original prompts. It's going to be a nightmare trying to figure out which one to vote for later.
Thank you very much! I've never written a spin off before, so I was worried I made it too safe.
To:Naru_Sheny
Thank you for giving it a look. Writing from the girl's point of view just felt natural.
An interesting start. There are a few typos and some sentences aren't capitalized. But I love the way the chapter ended. It's both ominous and uplifting!
To:TheGrompFather
Cats sure know how to get our attention, don't they? lol 😂 Good luck with the contest!
