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Saika

Hello Everyone! I'm a lover of all things horror, and can't go a day without writing or reading! My dream is to be a published author, so hopefully being on Honeyfeed will help. Thanks in advance for reading my work!

registered at: Oct 08, 2023

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Oct 18, 2023

To:Tearing Sanctuary

You're welcome. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

Paper Planes

Chapter:1

Oct 18, 2023

I love the ending! The way she spookily wonders if he'll be the one to "fly" with her. And the way he wonders if he loves her for her, or because of how they met was very interesting. It's a refreshing change from the "love at first sight just because" trope. And it fits with the main story perfectly as a prolog!

Call of the Sky

Chapter:1

Oct 18, 2023

I love the idea, but I did notice some typos here and there. This was a great way to show how loss and grief can help people see beyond themselves. Nicely done.

Thanatos & Eros' Artworks

Chapter:1

Oct 18, 2023

I love the core idea of this one. It's very original. I do think some of the sentences at the beginning are a bit choppy. But I like how clear you made his reasons for being on the roof clear, before he told the girl. Nicely done.

Paper Planes

Chapter:1

Oct 18, 2023

To:otkrlj

Thank you! I actually have another story ready to be uploaded, but it's not for the contest. So, I'm going to wait until it's over.

How I Became a Thanatos

Chapter:1

Oct 18, 2023

To:otkrlj

Thank you for writing it. Seeing Mana show up in another story would be interesting lol.

A Reversal

Chapter:1

Oct 18, 2023

To:Pearlyn.M

Thank you for writing it! I'll keep an eye out for your other entry as well!

Notes from AKIRA-CHAN

Chapter:1

Oct 17, 2023

The title makes so much sense now! This was scary and realistic rolled into one. Maybe next time Mana will think twice about where she breaks up with someone.

A Reversal

Chapter:1

Oct 17, 2023

That was amazing! I loved how subtle Akira chan was being, and the creepy way she said the girlfriend "was in a better place." I'd love to read more about Akira chan in the future, this could easily be expanded into a novel!

Notes from AKIRA-CHAN

Chapter:1

Oct 17, 2023

To:Glitch

Thank you for writing it! I loved your versions of Eros and Thana!

Eros

Chapter:1

Oct 17, 2023

To:Pearlyn.M

Thank you! I wanted the ending to fit the last frames in the Japanese music video.

How I Became a Thanatos

Chapter:1

Oct 16, 2023

To:leila

Thank you for writing it. I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck!

The Weight of a Dandelion

Chapter:1

Oct 16, 2023

To:Mashin Botan

I think I read that one too, and if I didn't then I defiantly will!

Dear Sunshine,

Chapter:1

Oct 16, 2023

To:Nesrynn

Mine too. Have you considered getting Grammarly? It's what I use and it's really good.

Eros' Embrace

Chapter:1

Oct 16, 2023

The idea was really good, but it also felt rushed in some places. It has a strong beginning, and the ending reminds me of a Greek myth. Nicely done.

Eros

Chapter:1