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Saika

Hello Everyone! I'm a lover of all things horror, and can't go a day without writing or reading! My dream is to be a published author, so hopefully being on Honeyfeed will help. Thanks in advance for reading my work!

registered at: Oct 08, 2023

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aaa

Oct 16, 2023

This is unlike anything I've read for the contest. I love how you captured the themes without relying on the Thanatos/Eros trope!

The Weight of a Dandelion

Chapter:1

Oct 16, 2023

This was interesting. I love how we don't know what's actually happening, but we can guess what happened to the wife. I love stories like this!

Dear Sunshine,

Chapter:1

Oct 15, 2023

To:Mashin Botan

That makes sense, but this was a very good read. And I liked the conversation. It was familiar but it also helped conceal the twist ending!

A Letter From Thanatos

Chapter:1

Oct 15, 2023

To:Tu Mello

I completely agree! To me, the best short stories are the ones that haunt the mind and leave you wanting more!

What does she see?

Chapter:1

Oct 15, 2023

To:Tu Mello

Thank you very much! I was worried it was going to be too safe, but I'm so glad you like it! Thank you for following me!

How I Became a Thanatos

Chapter:1

Oct 15, 2023

To:Fumihito

Thank you for writing it. And your cover fits the story perfectly!

Sayonara Sekai!

Chapter:1

Oct 14, 2023

This was awesome! Having Eros be the one to comfort her, and help give her a reason to live was wonderful! I did see a couple of typos, but this story really stands out!

Eros' Embrace

Chapter:1

Oct 14, 2023

The plot was good, but there are several typos like character names, and sentences not being capitalized. The pov switches are also a bit confusing, because there's no visual indicator like extra spaces to help show it. The ending was also very good, and it's also refreshing to see a sibling play the role of Thanatos instead of a lover. Good job!

Sayonara Sekai!

Chapter:1

Oct 14, 2023

I agree with Glitch, but I did enjoy the twist ending. He didn't give up, and she didn't become his Thanatos despite him having similar feelings. It's a shame we can't have more chapters, because I would love to see more of this version. Very well done!

What does she see?

Chapter:1

Oct 14, 2023

The line "embrace the night life" reminds me of a vampire manga/anime. Call of the Night. This was a very good read!

A Letter From Thanatos

Chapter:1

Oct 13, 2023

To:Raynad

Thank you for writing it. I honestly didn't see the truth about his girlfriend coming, so I think it's very good.

You Are My Only Reason

Chapter:1

Oct 13, 2023

The ending really ties everything together, but the mc's actions were strange for the most part. I know grief makes us do things we wouldn't normally do, but his imagination feels compulsive. He loved her so much his mind tricked him into "meeting" her again. It's very interesting.

You Are My Only Reason

Chapter:1

Oct 13, 2023

I loved the twist at the end linking it back to the source material! Very well done!

White Nights

Chapter:1

Oct 13, 2023

It feels like I'm reading a mix between a poem, and one of the classic fantasy stories. The world felt alive, but I do wish we knew what happened to Emily. It feels like there's supposed to be more, but very well done!

Silent Solace

Chapter:1

Oct 10, 2023

It should be illegal to end on a cliffhanger that good! I really enjoyed the story so far. I did notice that some words are written in the wrong tense, and there are typos in every chapter. But the plot is amazing! If you get a beta reader, or give yourself time to read it with fresh eyes, then you could catch the typos! I look forward to seeing how Max and his friends deal with the monster, or die trying.

Torrent

Chapter:6