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Hello Everyone! I'm a lover of all things horror, and can't go a day without writing or reading! My dream is to be a published author, so hopefully being on Honeyfeed will help. Thanks in advance for reading my work!
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Oct 17, 2023
This was the first entry to make me want to cry. And I mean that in a good way.
The title makes so much sense now! This was scary and realistic rolled into one. Maybe next time Mana will think twice about where she breaks up with someone.
That was amazing! I loved how subtle Akira chan was being, and the creepy way she said the girlfriend "was in a better place." I'd love to read more about Akira chan in the future, this could easily be expanded into a novel!
To:Glitch
Thank you for writing it! I loved your versions of Eros and Thana!
To:Pearlyn.M
Thank you! I wanted the ending to fit the last frames in the Japanese music video.
Oct 16, 2023
To:leila
Thank you for writing it. I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck!
To:Mashin Botan
I think I read that one too, and if I didn't then I defiantly will!
To:Nesrynn
Mine too. Have you considered getting Grammarly? It's what I use and it's really good.
The idea was really good, but it also felt rushed in some places. It has a strong beginning, and the ending reminds me of a Greek myth. Nicely done.
This is unlike anything I've read for the contest. I love how you captured the themes without relying on the Thanatos/Eros trope!
This was interesting. I love how we don't know what's actually happening, but we can guess what happened to the wife. I love stories like this!
Oct 15, 2023
That makes sense, but this was a very good read. And I liked the conversation. It was familiar but it also helped conceal the twist ending!
To:Tu Mello
I completely agree! To me, the best short stories are the ones that haunt the mind and leave you wanting more!
Thank you very much! I was worried it was going to be too safe, but I'm so glad you like it! Thank you for following me!
To:Fumihito
Thank you for writing it. And your cover fits the story perfectly!
