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Hello Everyone! I'm a lover of all things horror, and can't go a day without writing or reading! My dream is to be a published author, so hopefully being on Honeyfeed will help. Thanks in advance for reading my work!
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Oct 24, 2023
To:Capricious
Thank you for writing it. It was a very enjoyable read. I'll be on the lookout for your other entry as well!
To:Crunchykelp
Thanks, you too!
This was a great sequel! It was hard to know who was talking sometimes, but this was really well done!
This was an interesting read. I like the idea of a death reaper sending people dreams before they're about to die. But there are a couple of typos and the way some of the dialogue is set up. Feels more like a screenplay than a novel, especially with their names in a different font. Not bad, though.
To:Rathi
Not a problem. Good luck with the contest!
This might be the scariest entry I've read. Nicely done. Keep up the excellent work!
This was an interesting retelling, but if the girl is the one saying, "I'm ruled by Thanatos." Then it should be part of the previous paragraph because it looks like the guy is saying it otherwise. Good job.
Always nice to see supportive parents. This was a cute chapter.
It feels very believable. You're doing a great job 👍
To:Ramza Beoulve
Thank you 😊
Oct 23, 2023
To:SkeletonIdiot
Thank you for reading it! It was the first idea that I thought of!
Thank you for writing it. Good luck with the contest!
This was very good! You have a couple of typos, but the idea of multiple Eros and Thanatos is a cool concept. Nicely done.
That was a cute cliffhanger.
Oct 22, 2023
This was very good. I love how the ending is bittersweet and open to interpretation!