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Hello Everyone! I'm a lover of all things horror, and can't go a day without writing or reading! My dream is to be a published author, so hopefully being on Honeyfeed will help. Thanks in advance for reading my work!
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Nov 05, 2023
So, Eros thinks love is the most important thing? Even if it ends in death? I like this. It shows how love can change people, and Thanatos is trying to be the voice of reason. Very well done.
This was very good. I saw a couple of typos, but I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Nov 04, 2023
The plot is coming along nicely.
Nov 03, 2023
Raede gives off some serious Cheshire Cat vibes. I love it!
Nov 02, 2023
I sense a confrontation brewing, and more than one!
Nov 01, 2023
To:Mystic-Whisp
You're welcome. Keep up the good work and good luck with the contest.
This was fantastic. I did see a couple of typos, and seeing Yuki say Thanatos in a different paragraph, instead of combining it with the one above is a little jarring. But that ending had me hooked. Nicely done 👍
Thank you very much!
To:Kurono Kuro
It was amazing. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Oct 31, 2023
Interesting way to choose someone to save the world. But if she's around the same age as Junpei then that could complicate things nicely. Very well done 👍
Oct 30, 2023
This was really good! I love how you retold the story through a new character, and gave it a twist!
Thank you very much. I wanted to capture the "Thanatos taking the form of our ideal companion" line.
Oct 29, 2023
I love how you explain the recipes without breaking the immersion of the story. This is very nicely done.
Oct 28, 2023
This was super cute. I can already tell that Estelle will be one of my favorite characters.
Oct 27, 2023
This was interesting, but if he lied in the last chapter. What made him decide to blow his cover now? Why was he in the army in the first place? I'll look forward to finding out!