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Apr 14, 2025
I agree about pacing, but like I’m enjoying it. I’m just guessing the style is more suited to longer chapters. So whatever, I’m not as critical on that. my only criticism is for a romance I’m not feeling the heart flutters yet but if it’s like longer chapter mindset I’ll see by chapter 5ish whether my heart is doki doki or not. But it is very well written so that’s a solid
To:Eytha
thank you. I’m glad the tone is resonating with you 😊
Apr 13, 2025
To:Stoneflew
It is coming to an end. Very soon. Thank you for supporting it so far
Apr 12, 2025
To:Cashew Cocoa
I love that this chapter evoked emotion, even if it is one of dislike for the entire chapter. Anyway, I will take the feedback on board :)
To:sameeeee
Wait until you get to the whole "Orange is good" bit. It'll be a good mango indeed.
To:Slow
Thank you for reading until the end. I hope you enjoyed it. I hope it got you to think. Thanks again :)
Not everything has a happy ending or does it who knows?
I’m sorry, you are going to be disappointed. I don’t have a cat. that madness is a reflection of my inner madness and the madness that was, that is, that will be, in the rift
I think this may be the first non-sexual bath scene in the comp. Also good anime… I see… we are going there
I’m glad you like it. I would also add tanythimg by David Lynch.
I disagree with bubbles here. I really like the florally way you write this. I don’t find it grey but rather part of the magical, fantastical part of the world.
I caught up since there was only a handful of chapters. I look forward to learning more about the termination. Good job
Lie dammit! Lie. leave them in ignorance. MWHAHAHA
To:Bubbles
You, can, never, have, too, many, commas.
You expect serious replies from not so serious people. yes to fuck chapter providing a cucumber is involved somehow. surely some good shenanigans could transpire
