Feb 05, 2025
To:theACE
Thank you so much for reading and for your comment / feedback. I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and I appreciate your advice I’ll certainly look into it, and see what can be changed. I also read some storys on this theme here and agree that It’s fascinating how different perspectives can emerge from the same theme. I wasn’t entirely satisfied with this chapter myself, as I felt I may have overcomplicated things a bit. Much of its inspiration comes from parts of my life that are not good, which maybe influenced its tone. However, I think that with time I can refine it, and I’m already working on Chapter 2.