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Jul 20, 2021

To:Bubbles

I've been trying to balance out the narration of the more grounded Maribell vs. the comedic feel that Snazzy brings. Looks like that's working from what you said. The random breaks in narration tho. I feel like that's a horrible habit of mine, probably influenced by light novels. My mind goes to make jabs at things in the middle of narration like a knee jerk reflex.
Thanks for the input!

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:4

Jul 19, 2021

To:Pearlyn.M

Snazzy putting his internet personality acting skills to use. But yes, even that can't mask his true thoughts from Onee-san.

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:10

Jul 19, 2021

This writing just pops for me. Expressive, flamboyant, full of character - just like Honey, and even Misha at the other spectrum. I really like dynamic characters that play off each other, and this one certainly caught my attention (even more than RA, 🤭)
I think you're doing a stellar job. The style stands out from the other entries that I've read so far, in a good way. Into the library this goes.

Midnight King

Chapter:5

Jul 19, 2021

I can't stop thinking of Mashiro as a male Bakarina with that hoe now...

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:7

Jul 19, 2021

"Wait, that's cringe." 😂

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:6

Jul 19, 2021

Why do I feel like an old man sipping tea while watching his granddaughter flip out about daily life, all the while ignoring all the weird things she thinks about as 'puberty'? 🤔

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:5

Jul 19, 2021

To:Deleted User

Jellyfish sandwich is just comes from the "PB and Jelly" sandwhich shaped like a jellyfish.
But I was using it in place of a Gordon Ramsay meme.

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:7

Jul 18, 2021

To:znf

I actually had to look up the name Trifecta. It's likely a result of me being used to light novels that almost always seem to explain the name of an adventuring party. I'll take a look and see if I can't tighten up those parts. Thanks!

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:9

Jul 18, 2021

To:Pearlyn.M

I never asked for your forgiveness, now did I? 😘

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:9

Jul 18, 2021

To:Pearlyn.M

So... did I lose out on a like for almost choking you to death?

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:9

Jul 18, 2021

To:takanashi

I consider Snazzy and Maribell as two halves of a dynamic duo. 😁

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:1

Jul 18, 2021

To:sajihon

A teaser 😉

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:8

Jul 18, 2021

To:FADEX

Who says he won't? 😉

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:2

Jul 18, 2021

To:FADEX

Thanks! You're in for a wild ride.

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:1

Jul 17, 2021

The next few chapters after my last comment were enjoyable. They fed towards the story that you wanted to build. They were more lively and interesting. I think you're moving in the right direction now. It just took a bit of a grind to get to the good parts.

MINUS • PLUS

Chapter:6

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