Jul 30, 2023
I would say that there's nothing really confusing about these three chapters. If anything, it's a bit general and lacking of specifics that would give the world some flavor. The only time you dive into specifics is with a strange conversion of measurement units (which I question why you even have). All in all, you have the motions of someone traversing through places in an isekai, but nothing really stands out because you breeze through the scantily described environments. The MC has barely gained any understanding of the world he is in. Especially given that you do a scene break to purposefully fill the reader in on some of the background.
