Mar 24, 2025

so she is the real reason people are stuck there to begin with

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Mar 23, 2025

BIG STUFF.
BIG BALLOONS.

Oh gran gran, thank you for that amazing extra character detail about our protag. This is why you are my favorite character.

Hmmm, I wonder what army girl deal is. But I am loving her interactions with MC. Can't wait for their revelations and back stories when they begin to drop.
Great chapter!
Will patiently be waiting for the next one, DD.

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Mar 22, 2025

hmmm, honestly I thought the MC would be unlikable but...
I kind of like her.
is this because of the conversation she is having with the pregnant lady? maybe.

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Mar 22, 2025

To:Sinnocence

haha, sinoooooooooo!
thank you thank you thank you for Reading. finally he is now fully a part of her life. things with spirits are only going to get more chaotic from here lol.

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Mar 22, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

oh! I member. it was initially a deliberate choice to wrap all of them in a single dialogue tag. but I see how that might come across as confusing. I have fixed it now. thank you.

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Mar 22, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

ah, so it's all in one section. this will be easy for me to fix. thank you so much

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Mar 22, 2025

To:sameeeee

will patiently be waitin.

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Mar 22, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

thank you so much Mario for dropping a comment. honestly I didn't think you would continue with the story since it involves horror elements. but I am glad you kept on Reading. could you please specify where I forgot to add quotation marks ? I checked but I couldn't find exactly where you were referencing.

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Mar 22, 2025

To:Sinnocence

I am starting to run out of creative ways to start this comment lmao.
sinoooooooooo!
thank you thank you thank you.
your attention to detail is very scary. I'm glad you picked up on the idea of jumo simply giving up because he was basically done with all of the constant rejections. I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter. thank you so much for Reading.

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Mar 21, 2025

B Plus in calculus. grandma is one of my favorite favorite characters.
story is taking an interesting turn though. would love to see what comes next.
can't wait Sam.

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Mar 20, 2025

To:Sinnocence

sino! sino! sino!
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuub so so much for Reading. I really appreciate it. I'm glad you are enjoying the character dynamics. it's really fun to write them. Kanna, will eventually come to light, telling you why she trained her daughter to the point of becoming a killing machine, and why she sympathize with Sakuya's love. and I will definitely look into your suggestions about adding movements during the speech. thank you so much again for Reading, and I hope to see you in the next chapter.

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Mar 20, 2025

their banter is really cute

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Mar 20, 2025

To:Lihinel

haha
and thank youuuuuu
for Reading

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Mar 20, 2025

To:Nika Zimt

thanks so much for Reading

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Mar 19, 2025

this chapter was so emotionally gripping

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