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I mainly love writing anime inspired stories. So I am really glad I found this platform blackmangacontact@gmail.com.
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Apr 01, 2025
that good morning joke was gold
interesting first chapter. curious to see how things goes
To:Lihinel
exactly what I was going for lol. but don't worry. next chapter will be slower.
Ohai li.
I understand what you are saying, and I agree, but the focus of the split chapter was not meant to be on the battle. It was meant to be on the characters. I intend to focus on fighting choreography once Jumo is able to take full control of Ogun's powers. That is when I will really focus on writing full blown action scenes with him.
Mar 31, 2025
wow. that was a pleasant surprise. totally wasn't expecting that. if anything, I thought it would have been the military girl who transformed or something. but was definitely another great chapter
trying to get rid of that plot device lol. or at least modify it to make the rules more clear. but by next chapter everything should be clear. thank you for Reading liiii
Mar 30, 2025
more more more more more
another great chapter Shiro I like how they are warming up to each other
Mar 29, 2025
interesting first chapter. I am definitely interested in learning more about the protagonist
wow. a rather chill and reflective chapter. some deep stuff going on as well. great job
an interesting start for sure
it's not that lol part of her back story she just saw tattoos and automatically associated them with her past
To:Mario Nakano 64
thank you so much for the suggestion Mario and thank you even more for reading my story. I really really appreciate it. having snippets of Japanese here and there was something I have always wanted to do from the beginning. but you are definitely right. in this chapter it was a bit much. I will look into cutting it down.
To:Cashew Cocoa
thank you so much for reading cashew, I am really glad you liked the chapter. and I understand your suggestion about the structure. at this point of the story, I was still struggling to find the right structure. but I promise I am trying to improve. thank you so much for reading and I really really appreciate it.
Mar 28, 2025
lol it's quite the opposite actually the elders were all initially human but while writing I decided to change things up last night I just feel like it makes more sense now that they are a mix of Spirits and humans now