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Kuro

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Weaver of tales. Loves to make things by word or by hand.

registered at: Mar 16, 2025

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May 15, 2025

To:farfriar42

Geez, what is going on with Motohara and Otonashi? Two guys, very different styles.

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:11

May 15, 2025

To:Kantaru

I love this feedback! Please tell me if anything isn't working for you or is confusing. I hope you love Shiori's story!

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:1

May 14, 2025

Jade is the unexpected ladies man and the dynamic with Ariel makes sense. This has a very casual, cozy feeling as it develops.

The Boy Who Fell From the Sky

Chapter:13

May 14, 2025

Conner is a sharp guy and easy to get along with. This glance into their lives works well, and I feel like Conner is quickly figuring out that something is off.

The Boy Who Fell From the Sky

Chapter:12

May 14, 2025

To:Japanese🌹Rose

I've got plans for a sequel and even a epilogue chapter. I would love your feedback on the ending since it has been so useful throughout!

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:38

May 14, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

I have a feeling Tsubame might be familiar with all kinds of trouble. 😄

I liked the idea of an Emporia and needed to introduce it early enough that I could use it later. Hopefully it wasn't too confusing.

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:10

May 14, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

I liked writing Otonashi through this part and hope he's fun to read as the story develops. I appreciate all of the feedback.

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:9

May 10, 2025

I figured it was Janice even bfmefore she said her name. What a peach.

Love how things are building.

Now Jade must do battle with... Windows!

The Boy Who Fell From the Sky

Chapter:11

May 10, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

Shiori can't seem to catch a break! Things will get more mixed up and dangerous, but hopefully the ride is fun!

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:8

May 09, 2025

To:farfriar42

Mores/Motohara had been through some stuff!

I don't think he ought to hold out for a comforting hug from Symphon just yet. 🙃

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:28

May 09, 2025

To:farfriar42

"Oops, sorry, didn't see that tree branch. Ah, dang, that's gonna leave a mark!" 😂

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:27

May 09, 2025

To:farfriar42

Oh, the Duke is gonna get his, but only after he's done a bit more to earn it. 😡

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:26

May 09, 2025

Conner reminds me of some people I've met in the Army. Wish I had more time to make it to the next chapter faster.

The Boy Who Fell From the Sky

Chapter:10

May 09, 2025

Ariel has two very different men in her life now, and doesn't want either of them near her problems. It creates a good dramatic tension.

First signs that Jade is worried about home. Looking forward to seeing how that develops!

The Boy Who Fell From the Sky

Chapter:9

May 09, 2025

To:Sakura Mazaki

Well you're clever! Yeah, the Proncesses of Nyx are really important, and apparently Shiori is one of them?

We'll have more detailed info on Princesses later, and hopefully that proves to be a fun read!

Realms of Nyx

Chapter:7