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Apr 28, 2025
So, I rewrote parts of this chapter. I felt that Jess was just a little out of character. I hope you enjoy the changes.
Apr 27, 2025
The picture is becoming clearer. Things are starting to make sense. Atleast Miyami has a friend now.
man. Lars is sure nosy. Almost too nosy. i hope he doesn’t ruin everything.
Ame is not wrong. this is a life altering choice for her. one that may have severe consequences. I know that I said it before, but I feel for both of them. you created characters that are easy to invest in.
this is not a good situation. I am literally crying for the both of them.
this was a nice seen. you have created great characters. i enjoyed the day out with t he friends and the morning breakfast. Ame is in a tough situation. I do not envy her
loved this chapter. thank you.
wow! Roomates! I feel so sorry for her. she must be terrified at this moment.
Apr 26, 2025
you have created a believable world with a good understanding of the main protagonist. i look forward to seeing what develops
First, the effort Hinoka makes to interact wit Miyami speaks volumes about her character. Second, what’s up with the guy outside? can’t leave us hanging like this
As a teacher, I know several people with this level of anxiety. I think that you are doing good job at portraying her. I like that you are showing growth in her, and were able to show some of her true hidden character.
I agree with Haru. this is well written, and I am glad, but not surprised, that she accepted him.
Apr 25, 2025
and drugging is own son to get compliance.
Apr 24, 2025
Wow! Anya has made promise that is her first sign of corruption. will she keep her word
To:lolitroy
Don’t worry about it. I don’t mind the feedback. In fact, I appreciate it. if you find it easier at the end, that is ok. This story actually plays out over 13 volumes.
