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May 02, 2025

Finally. The Overseer keeps showing up on the battlefield. He needs to be the target. Forget the enforcers. Looking forward to how this unfolds.

Under the Dome

Chapter:45

May 02, 2025

ugh! The tension. I read through the whole chapter thinking to myself they are going to kiss. Everything was building to it, then BAM. it doesn’t happen. Well played… I hope Miyami doesn’t spiral after this.

Communicate With Me, Miyami!!!

Chapter:8

May 02, 2025

Teacher crushes… I remember mine. But to be honest it is good to see him come out of his shell. I was surprised to see him agree. more important is that his classmates are beginning to see him. he is no longer invisible. As always, I look forward to seeing what comes next.

When the Star Appeared

Chapter:15

May 02, 2025

Landlord equates to villain. There is a lot of truth there. also, loved the part about the advantages of being invisible. I can relate to that.

if the moon forgets to smile

Chapter:27

May 02, 2025

I had been looking forward to this. I particularly liked the line about everything else hurting. I have not quite figured out what the gunslinger is, but he is not normal.

if the moon forgets to smile

Chapter:26

May 02, 2025

Wow! That was a ride. I am intrigued in where this story goes.

The Department of Extradimensional Affairs

Chapter:0

May 02, 2025

To:Mara

Thanks

The Dominion Protocol Volume 1: The Awakening

Chapter:1

May 01, 2025

what is up with the cat? The witch has a heart, but her familiar doesn’t. I am interested in finding out why. thanks for the story.

Ren and the Witch

Chapter:4

May 01, 2025

Hatred can be a consuming thing. I am wondering what it will take to change his father.

Mission: Love

Chapter:25

May 01, 2025

I am really beginning to like Hoshiko as a character. I find interesting because she is mysterious.

When the Star Appeared

Chapter:14

May 01, 2025

To:lolitroy

That is what she believes.

The Dominion Protocol Volume 1: The Awakening

Chapter:33

May 01, 2025

To:lolitroy

Thank you for the comments. I think that you are being completely fair. Many of the things I have incorporated and tried to address in later stories. I like to think that I am improving. I will definitely use your advice to fix the past stories and in my editing of the future stories

I really appreciate your help.

The Dominion Protocol Volume 1: The Awakening

Chapter:34

Apr 30, 2025

In a way, I am beginning to feel a little sorry for him. I remember what it was like to have a crush on my teacher.

When the Star Appeared

Chapter:13

Apr 30, 2025

an interesting way to get information from him.

When the Star Appeared

Chapter:12

Apr 29, 2025

Thank you very much for not carrying on that argument too long. I don’t think I would have been able to handle it. this was a very moving chapter.

Sera & Ame

Chapter:9

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