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Oct 04, 2025
To:Mai
I forgot that you were a nurse. That is why the nurse parts came across so professionally.
I would not want to be in her situation for sure.
Really! that is great.
I understood what you were trying to do with him, he just came across creepy. I will go back and read some of the early chapters to see how you changed him. Thanks for the very nice comments about me. ☺️
Oct 03, 2025
😭The past is never truly gone.
Yep it is confirmed. Like i said. you have ways of clarifying things. It is like you know what questions your readers are asking as they read. One of the things I like about your storytelling style.
I love this story. I love how you give little hints to the past and the future. You have introduced many characters in the beginning. You mentioned Li being the little sister. Is Laya the same person?
Thanks for clearing that up. I thought as much though and knew you would make it obvious later.
I like how you make me feel like I am there. like she is talking to me while going through her life.
I love that you didn’t make her choose at the end. It leaves it up to me to imagine her choice. Thank you for sharing your story.
Those last paragraphs were full of emotion.
😭This was a nice chapter. I can only imagine what Ina is going through.
This was a good chapter to recap everything that happened before.
It is great that she feels like a daughter at the end.
I think it is great that she feels that love from her parents