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Jun 21, 2025

To:Elena Masquitz

I think you did well with Yui’s internal dialogue. I particularly like how you described her reaction to her parents fighting. It reminds me of my own experience. I can relate to it. I also like the internal dialogue when she is questioning Soutarou’s intentions. Both of these have helped strengthen Yui as a believable character that the reader can be invested in. we get to know her more. As for my stories. they are called Dominion Protocol. they are published here. Thank you for writing. I look forward to reading more. I like the story, and I will read it to the end.

Stay

Chapter:4

Jun 21, 2025

two strangers meet in the rain. This story is full of hope. It tells me that love has a way of sneaking into our lives, whether we want it or not. As most often the case, it is something we did not even know we deserved.

Short Stories

Chapter:8

Jun 21, 2025

I think this will complicate things.

Fushikano: After Getting Dumped and Trying to Jump off a Footbridge, I End Up Rescuing a Cute Girl with Uncanny Abilities

Chapter:35

Jun 21, 2025

Being alone can do weird things to the mind. I wonder if the other woman was real.

Short Stories

Chapter:7

Jun 21, 2025

Interesting world. I would like to know more about it sometime. I think it is interesting that this apocalyptic world where the humans were replaced

Short Stories

Chapter:6

Jun 21, 2025

To:Mara

It is definitely a different game for them as the move into this new world

Dominion Protocol Volume 8: Those Who Refuse the Throne

Chapter:16

Jun 21, 2025

To:Mara

Roma. This place will play a big part later.

Dominion Protocol Volume 8: Those Who Refuse the Throne

Chapter:15

Jun 21, 2025

Another good chapter. These are complex feelings and are often difficult to portray. You did it well.

Stay

Chapter:4

Jun 20, 2025

The scene at the mall was great. I can see that the feelings between them has grown. But, what is with these guys at the end?

Fushikano: After Getting Dumped and Trying to Jump off a Footbridge, I End Up Rescuing a Cute Girl with Uncanny Abilities

Chapter:34

Jun 20, 2025

Nice. The whole chapter feels genuine. I can believe the group of friends out together for a summer day.

Soft Chords, Loud Hearts

Chapter:1

Jun 20, 2025

I hope they get the traitors.

Power of the Seed

Chapter:11

Jun 20, 2025

I am glad she got the rest she needed.

Power of the Seed

Chapter:10

Jun 20, 2025

Dancingbin the rain for wishes. Showing our true selfs. Thinking that nobody would ever like us for who we are. Only to return and pretend to be someone we are not. This is the trap, isn’t it? She is a lucky one to find someone that she will not need to pretend with. May we all find that person.

Short Stories

Chapter:5

Jun 20, 2025

To:Mara

That is what she fears the most now. Did she ever have free will? Or is she just an actor playing her part?

Dominion Protocol Volume 8: Those Who Refuse the Throne

Chapter:14

Jun 20, 2025

To:Mara

Dominion is the one pulling Vanguard's strings. The nature of Mr. Black will be revealed in a few chapters.

Dominion Protocol Volume 8: Those Who Refuse the Throne

Chapter:13

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