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Writing is a skill, and I constantly want to improve. I am excited to hear your criticism and learn from it.

registered at: Apr 21, 2025

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Oct 15, 2025

What happened to the MP3 player?

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:10

Oct 15, 2025

Good stuff.
I worried for a moment that you'd have his wings break in the crash, but I shouldn't have feared: you're better than that.

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:9

Oct 15, 2025

To:Engin

He’d need to acknowledge that he needs one first.

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:29

Oct 15, 2025

To:Engin

I hope you enjoy it; I like writing it.

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:25

Oct 15, 2025

To:Engin

Well, I'd like to see it when you're done. Thank you for enjoying my little story thus far.

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:21

Oct 14, 2025

Uh…
Okay
I was kind of confused by his reactor just converting to magic, but I was cool with it because it wasn’t a big deal.
But now it is a big deal, and I wanna know why it happened??
I do like Ylfa and Jere’s dynamic though

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:8

Oct 14, 2025

Nice! (
Though the fashion seems very ahead of its time for a medieval kingdom)

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:7

Oct 14, 2025

To:Caelinth

Ehhhh….
Depends on where we are in the book

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:6

Oct 14, 2025

To:Caelinth

It’s not…
Good, advice

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:2

Oct 14, 2025

Hey now…
I like priests
:sad:

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:6

Oct 14, 2025

Does Jere sound like Stephen Hawking’s robot voice?

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:5

Oct 14, 2025

What an existence.
Also…
What is an—oh someone already asked these questions.

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:4

Oct 14, 2025

A king that considers the long-term implications of a character’s actions? A character that considers the weight of his own life?
How interesting.

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:3

Oct 14, 2025

Just don’t think about meaning and you’ll be fine.

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:2

Oct 14, 2025

What an existence.

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:1

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