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Writing is a skill, and I constantly want to improve. I am excited to hear your criticism and learn from it.
What is an Achievement?
Oct 14, 2025
What an existence. Also… What is an—oh someone already asked these questions.
A king that considers the long-term implications of a character’s actions? A character that considers the weight of his own life? How interesting.
Just don’t think about meaning and you’ll be fine.
What an existence.
To:Engin
You ask for spoilers once more! (though bear in mind, he doesn't make up everything; he just likes to... play with the details a little)
Good question! But answering that would be a spoiler, wouldn’t it? Good job asking such a piercing question though!
Why thank you; I appreciate you going out of your way to comment!
I like wily main characters, what can I say?
Oct 13, 2025
Very nice.
Well well what the heck Dang that’s crazy. Not what I was expecting at all; not at all. I freaking love this; glad I kept reading.
A Love Triangle?! As an important historical plot point in the world? Dang that’s cool.😎 What a lovely backstory
My biggest fear now is that she’s actually NOT Raiona. That would be a wicked twist. But this is nice. This is very, very nice.
I may have laughed. I may have chuckled. I… I may have interrupted my family’s discussion with my outburst of laughter. You have no evidence
I can only imagine the scene from ‘How to Train Your Dragon 2’ where the female twin is looking at Eric, son of Eric, and is completely taken by his rippling musculature. It’s hilarious
I hope you enjoy it! I really put my all into writing it! (There will be grammatical errors; I tried to kill them all, but some were too slippery for me).