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Writing is a skill, and I constantly want to improve. I am excited to hear your criticism and learn from it.
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Jul 16, 2025
To:game301
Thank you for pointing that out! I would've never caught it. Please don't hesitate to call out any more errors you find (though I hope you'll never have to do it again). And please, tell me what you think about the story anytime!