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Writing is a skill, and I constantly want to improve. I am excited to hear your criticism and learn from it.

registered at: Apr 21, 2025

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Oct 23, 2025

Why can't we learn about these kinds of threats before they show up and kidnap children?!
a-and also stab Sayaka, crud.

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You

Chapter:12

Oct 23, 2025

And here we learn that the good guys aren't so good and the bad guys aren't so bad!

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You

Chapter:10

Oct 23, 2025

To:Zack Wilson

I liked writing that little bit.

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:11

Oct 23, 2025

THE TRIUMVIRATE?!
like...
like HIGH GUARDIAN SPICE?!

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You

Chapter:3

Oct 22, 2025

Brent....

my boy....

Reincarnation Royale

Chapter:31

Oct 22, 2025

Abandon all hope, ye who enter here.

(NOOOO!!!!! NOT BRENT!!!!)

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Chapter:30

Oct 22, 2025

NOOOOO!!!
NOT BRENT!
why couldn't it have been RYU?!😭😭

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Chapter:29

Oct 22, 2025

I can't tell if Elowyn or Grace was stabbed, because it says "Grace managed to get her words out," but then Razan shouts Elowyn's name.
I think it was Elowyn who got stabbed though, am I right?

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Chapter:27

Oct 22, 2025

Why is it that the evil gods can always fight but the good ones can never help?

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Chapter:23

Oct 22, 2025

"The Elven Elegy."
as performed by the court bard, in memory of King Martin Arclaneia the Third.

We sing a rarer song today,
For one who passes on.
Of our own kind, a member,
And one for whom we'll long.

Your time and memories with us,
Will be cherished in our songs.
For you've gone to meet the Goddess,
And we know your life goes on.

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Chapter:19

Oct 22, 2025

Everyone Else: "Yay we're gonna beat the goddess!"
Grace: *crisis of faith noises*

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Chapter:18

Oct 22, 2025

"You saved them, even if they can't or refuse to realize that."
Brent is so cool, I bet he'll be the one to break the time loop.

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Chapter:14

Oct 22, 2025

I love the description of Elowyn fighting the Illusionist. In my opinion, you portrayed a fight against an illusionist amazingly! Bravo, my good sir!

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Chapter:11

Oct 22, 2025

So the Goddess tells everyone they need another chance at life...
What a cruel twist of fate!

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Chapter:8

Oct 21, 2025

To:Anna Voig M.

You are very astute, and I love it, so don’t worry about being critical (Honestly I was more worried about my grammar being awful).
And with regards to the question about ‘mirra:’ no. I wish I had, but no.

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:12

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