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TheGreatZombini

Writing is a skill, and I constantly want to improve. I am excited to hear your criticism and learn from it.

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Oct 21, 2025

To:Anna Voig M.

You are just…
Dang you pick at this like it’s a four course meal (love it!)

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:9

Oct 21, 2025

To:Anna Voig M.

Very astute observation! Though prayer isn’t forced into a box; there are many ways to pray. Sometimes—oh, I’m rambling again! Sorry!

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:6

Oct 21, 2025

To:Anna Voig M.

Yep! Some second hand knowledge!

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:4

Oct 21, 2025

To:Anna Voig M.

You’ll see!

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:3

Oct 21, 2025

To:Anna Voig M.

Right on the money!

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:2

Oct 21, 2025

To:Engin

I’m glad I was able to keep you intrigued, and I hope it made you think.
Have a good day!

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:52

Oct 21, 2025

To:Anna Voig M.

Strong word choice there!
Still, I hope you have fun reading about him!

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:1

Oct 17, 2025

Eny is an eldritch horror intent on consuming the souls of millions.
JUST LOOK AT HER.

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J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:24

Oct 17, 2025

First rule of Woodrow Village:
Don’t talk about Woodrow Village.
Second rule of Woodrow Village:
We’re cannibals

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J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:23

Oct 17, 2025

And then they died
The End.

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J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:21

Oct 17, 2025

Eny is going to be a bioengineered superweapon too, I’m calling it now

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J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:20

Oct 17, 2025

Wouldn’t it be craaaazzzzzyyy if Ylfa died?
Or the kid.
Honestly Jere might go factory reset if Ylfa died.

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J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:19

Oct 17, 2025

And here we learn that love does not magically remove all of a person’s flaws
JERE
(jeez they’re noncombatants dude)

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J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:18

Oct 17, 2025

Okay now you can blame the king for ambition and racism!

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Chapter:16

Oct 17, 2025

I mean…
Can you really blame the king and the… (okay depending on what the doctrine of the 14 gods actually states then you can probably blame the priest for his racism)
But can you really blame the humans for their apprehension towards Ylfa and Jere? It’s not like they’re super-strong humans (Jere is technically human) but all they’ve done to help people is violence.
Plus, they’re at war with the demons: this isn’t some casual time where the demons stick to their own land; there’s a war going on! Plus Ylfa’s made it clear that demon culture is just as cutthroat towards traitors as human culture is, if not more so.
All of this to say:
Can you really blame the king for his racism?

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J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:15