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Writing is a skill, and I constantly want to improve. I am excited to hear your criticism and learn from it.

registered at: Apr 21, 2025

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Dec 30, 2025

To:Makari_Mikage_Japan

I see; I’ve received similar responses from others, so I’ll definitely keep this suggestion in mind.
I hope the rest of the story captivates you though! Thank you for your comment.

Twist

Chapter:1

Dec 29, 2025

Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest of what I’ve written!

Twist

Chapter:1

Dec 21, 2025

To:mindokusai

Thank you for your kind words! I appreciate you reading through the entire story; it took a lot of effort for me to finish it!

Would it be too much to ask you, politely, to make this an actual review of the novel?
I think it might affect the algorithm or something.

Miracle Miya

Chapter:51

Dec 13, 2025

To:mindokusai

Getting called to the principal’s office be like:

Miracle Miya

Chapter:18

Dec 13, 2025

To:mindokusai

That’s a good suggestion

Miracle Miya

Chapter:25

Dec 13, 2025

To:mindokusai

You’ll have to keep reading to find out…

Miracle Miya

Chapter:17

Dec 13, 2025

To:mindokusai

I researched the job and the burdens it came with, and it just got worse and worse the more I researched

Miracle Miya

Chapter:13

Dec 13, 2025

To:mindokusai

Ding ding ding!
Give the man a (tragic little) prize!

Miracle Miya

Chapter:11

Dec 12, 2025

To:mindokusai

Intention is everything! I like your attention to detail!

Also, the pfp from that old Popeye cartoon is sick

Miracle Miya

Chapter:4

Dec 12, 2025

To:mindokusai

I hope I can hold your interest until the end!

Miracle Miya

Chapter:1

Nov 07, 2025

To:kcayu

Thank you for your comment! I hope I can tell a meaningful story with this one!

Miracle Miya

Chapter:1

Oct 30, 2025

To:Anna Voig M.

Let loose!

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:52

Oct 28, 2025

…
Looks like there is rest for the wicked.
…
Who would’ve guessed?

An Original Sin

Chapter:27

Oct 28, 2025

…
Someone who would never leave your side?
You won’t find someone like that on this, or any other, world.
You would have to look to the divine.
…
It’s too late for Justin.
It’s not too late for you, Zbrke. You draw breath.
It’s not too late.

An Original Sin

Chapter:26

Oct 28, 2025

How do they know the sword does the whole ‘erase your essence from existence’ thing? Did a prophet tell them about that?
…
Justin, you could always put the sword down. You don’t need to work harder. You can’t work harder. You can’t do it.
You can’t kill your guilt.
You’ll never be able to get rid of it by yourself…
Thankfully, I know a guy who can get rid of it for you, and you won’t have to raise a finger.
You would, however, need to pray.
…
…
There’s still time, Justin Beckwith.

An Original Sin

Chapter:25

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