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Writing is a skill, and I constantly want to improve. I am excited to hear your criticism and learn from it.

registered at: Apr 21, 2025

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Feb 11, 2026

To:otkrlj

Thank you! I kind of knew that the middle was muddled, but in order to reach the word requirement for the competition I had to expand the story a bit. If I end up not winning, I’ll probably take this story and trim it down into something much better.
Also, I must sincerely thank you (separately) for reading the entire story! That means a heck of a lot to me; your dedication to providing a solid critique of my story is very encouraging.
Have a nice day and God bless you!
(p.s. I hope to see you on my later works; you are definitely a great reader)

Miracle Miya

Chapter:51

Jan 13, 2026

To:fallere_chan

What do you think needs improving? Is it emotion?

Twist

Chapter:1

Dec 30, 2025

To:Makari_Mikage_Japan

I see; I’ve received similar responses from others, so I’ll definitely keep this suggestion in mind.
I hope the rest of the story captivates you though! Thank you for your comment.

Twist

Chapter:1

Dec 29, 2025

Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest of what I’ve written!

Twist

Chapter:1

Dec 21, 2025

To:mindokusai

Thank you for your kind words! I appreciate you reading through the entire story; it took a lot of effort for me to finish it!

Would it be too much to ask you, politely, to make this an actual review of the novel?
I think it might affect the algorithm or something.

Miracle Miya

Chapter:51

Dec 13, 2025

To:mindokusai

Getting called to the principal’s office be like:

Miracle Miya

Chapter:18

Dec 13, 2025

To:mindokusai

That’s a good suggestion

Miracle Miya

Chapter:25

Dec 13, 2025

To:mindokusai

You’ll have to keep reading to find out…

Miracle Miya

Chapter:17

Dec 13, 2025

To:mindokusai

I researched the job and the burdens it came with, and it just got worse and worse the more I researched

Miracle Miya

Chapter:13

Dec 13, 2025

To:mindokusai

Ding ding ding!
Give the man a (tragic little) prize!

Miracle Miya

Chapter:11

Dec 12, 2025

To:mindokusai

Intention is everything! I like your attention to detail!

Also, the pfp from that old Popeye cartoon is sick

Miracle Miya

Chapter:4

Dec 12, 2025

To:mindokusai

I hope I can hold your interest until the end!

Miracle Miya

Chapter:1

Nov 07, 2025

To:kcayu

Thank you for your comment! I hope I can tell a meaningful story with this one!

Miracle Miya

Chapter:1

Oct 30, 2025

To:Anna Voig M.

Let loose!

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:52

Oct 28, 2025

…
Looks like there is rest for the wicked.
…
Who would’ve guessed?

An Original Sin

Chapter:26

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