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Writing is a skill, and I constantly want to improve. I am excited to hear your criticism and learn from it.

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Oct 21, 2025

To:Engin

I’m glad I was able to keep you intrigued, and I hope it made you think.
Have a good day!

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:52

Oct 21, 2025

To:Anna Voig M.

Strong word choice there!
Still, I hope you have fun reading about him!

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:1

Oct 17, 2025

Eny is an eldritch horror intent on consuming the souls of millions.
JUST LOOK AT HER.

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:24

Oct 17, 2025

First rule of Woodrow Village:
Don’t talk about Woodrow Village.
Second rule of Woodrow Village:
We’re cannibals

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:23

Oct 17, 2025

And then they died
The End.

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:21

Oct 17, 2025

Eny is going to be a bioengineered superweapon too, I’m calling it now

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:20

Oct 17, 2025

Wouldn’t it be craaaazzzzzyyy if Ylfa died?
Or the kid.
Honestly Jere might go factory reset if Ylfa died.

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:19

Oct 17, 2025

And here we learn that love does not magically remove all of a person’s flaws
JERE
(jeez they’re noncombatants dude)

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:18

Oct 17, 2025

Okay now you can blame the king for ambition and racism!

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:16

Oct 17, 2025

I mean…
Can you really blame the king and the… (okay depending on what the doctrine of the 14 gods actually states then you can probably blame the priest for his racism)
But can you really blame the humans for their apprehension towards Ylfa and Jere? It’s not like they’re super-strong humans (Jere is technically human) but all they’ve done to help people is violence.
Plus, they’re at war with the demons: this isn’t some casual time where the demons stick to their own land; there’s a war going on! Plus Ylfa’s made it clear that demon culture is just as cutthroat towards traitors as human culture is, if not more so.
All of this to say:
Can you really blame the king for his racism?

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:15

Oct 17, 2025

Wouldn’t it be funny if she was actually a terrible cook, but Jere doesn’t know how bad she is because he’s never eaten anything before?
That’d be freaking hilarious

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:14

Oct 17, 2025

Dang.
Does Jere flap his wings to fly or are they like jet wings? I’m not sure

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:13

Oct 16, 2025

To:Dani Alex

That is a lovely summary of the chapter. Thank you for posting that!

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:52

Oct 16, 2025

To:Engin

I was unaware of that fact. I just picked it because it sounded pretty.
Perhaps it was destiny.

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:39

Oct 15, 2025

What happened to the MP3 player?

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:10

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