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Writing is a skill, and I constantly want to improve. I am excited to hear your criticism and learn from it.

registered at: Apr 21, 2025

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Oct 17, 2025

Wouldn’t it be funny if she was actually a terrible cook, but Jere doesn’t know how bad she is because he’s never eaten anything before?
That’d be freaking hilarious

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:14

Oct 17, 2025

Dang.
Does Jere flap his wings to fly or are they like jet wings? I’m not sure

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:13

Oct 16, 2025

To:Dani Alex

That is a lovely summary of the chapter. Thank you for posting that!

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:52

Oct 16, 2025

To:Engin

I was unaware of that fact. I just picked it because it sounded pretty.
Perhaps it was destiny.

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:39

Oct 15, 2025

What happened to the MP3 player?

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:10

Oct 15, 2025

Good stuff.
I worried for a moment that you'd have his wings break in the crash, but I shouldn't have feared: you're better than that.

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:9

Oct 15, 2025

To:Engin

He’d need to acknowledge that he needs one first.

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:29

Oct 15, 2025

To:Engin

I hope you enjoy it; I like writing it.

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:25

Oct 15, 2025

To:Engin

Well, I'd like to see it when you're done. Thank you for enjoying my little story thus far.

The Great Priest is an Atheist?!

Chapter:21

Oct 14, 2025

Uh…
Okay
I was kind of confused by his reactor just converting to magic, but I was cool with it because it wasn’t a big deal.
But now it is a big deal, and I wanna know why it happened??
I do like Ylfa and Jere’s dynamic though

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:8

Oct 14, 2025

Nice! (
Though the fashion seems very ahead of its time for a medieval kingdom)

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:7

Oct 14, 2025

To:Caelinth

Ehhhh….
Depends on where we are in the book

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:6

Oct 14, 2025

To:Caelinth

It’s not…
Good, advice

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:2

Oct 14, 2025

Hey now…
I like priests
:sad:

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:6

Oct 14, 2025

Does Jere sound like Stephen Hawking’s robot voice?

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:5

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