Jul 08, 2025
Oooooo a very exciting start!! Your ability to pull in readers is fantastic! And like your other work I love the little extra details you weave in to make the piece come alive
Here are some of my favorites:
"I locked the door twice. Once out of habit. Once out of fear."
"She was cooking something probably with garlic and guilt."
"Creeps come and go. The library is full of ghosts."
