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Riskable

Father, Hacker (Information Security Professional), Open Source Software Developer, Inventor, and 3D printing enthusiast, and now, novelist.

registered at: Jun 26, 2025

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Sep 19, 2025

I have a feeling that Saif will go from grub to glory!

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:3

Sep 19, 2025

DINKUS! After: "I believe our little hatchling will blow us away. I just know it." 🤣

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:3

Sep 19, 2025

Need a dinkus after this line: "Hylfa and Bron soon fell asleep, excited for what the future brings."

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:2

Sep 19, 2025

Typo: "Said got a message from Sara this time." should be "Saif got a message from Sara this time."

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:1

Sep 19, 2025

You should put a dinkus after this line: "I hope Hylfa hasn’t left for work already."

HF doesn't support proper dinkus or horizontal rules so you just have to pick some characters and center them: * * * is common.

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:1

Sep 19, 2025

"They’re hanging on by a threat!" should probably be, "They’re hanging on by a thread!" 👍

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:1

Sep 15, 2025

Something went wrong with your quotes when you pasted this into Honeyfeed... "They're getting split up

like this"
LOL. You'll see what I mean if you search for double quotes: "

The Daughter of Cursed Steel

Chapter:8

Sep 15, 2025

Typo: "May I reccoment a tactical retreat"

The Daughter of Cursed Steel

Chapter:8

Sep 14, 2025

This is a good story! It would definitely make for a badass anime. I'd watch it 👍

The Daughter of Cursed Steel

Chapter:6

Sep 14, 2025

Great writing 👍

The Daughter of Cursed Steel

Chapter:2

Sep 13, 2025

Your story pacing is just <chef's kiss> 👍

I Don’t Take Bull from Anyone, Not Even a Demon Lord

Chapter:3

Sep 13, 2025

"Our town is know as Ohana." should be "Our town is known as Ohana."
(typo)

Our Town in another world

Chapter:1

Sep 13, 2025

Haha I love "Menshin Impact" 🤣

Minichi Time

Chapter:1

Sep 13, 2025

"One and a half years after debut as a band" should probably be:

"One and a half years after the band's debut"

...but you could just fix the tense with "One and a half years after debuting as a band" (but that sounds weird).

Minichi Time

Chapter:1

Sep 13, 2025

> There’s a strange flavor to the air here, not quite a scent, more like an energy. Similar to the crispness in the air after a heavy thunderstorm. Refreshing.

There's a word for this: Petrichor. You could take it at the end, after "Refreshing" if you wanted:

> There’s a strange flavor to the air here, not quite a scent, more like an energy. Similar to the crispness in the air after a heavy thunderstorm. Refreshing petrichor.

Not important. Would just be an appropriate use of a word you don't see too often 😀

Taking Healing To Higher Levels In Another World

Chapter:3