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Father, Hacker (Information Security Professional), Open Source Software Developer, Inventor, and 3D printing enthusiast, and now, novelist.

registered at: Jun 26, 2025

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aaa

Aug 26, 2025

I love the concept of magic rings (and similar) forcibly inserting knowledge of how to use them into your mind (and having that knock you on your ass) 👍

Dame Da Dungeon

Chapter:3

Aug 26, 2025

This is some badass imagery 👍

Dame Da Dungeon

Chapter:1

Aug 25, 2025

"Taken under the wing of the god of failure" sure has a nice ring to it. Or it would, if the ringer worked.

Failure Will Make My Pen Sharp as a Blade: My Writer's Life in Another World

Chapter:1

Aug 25, 2025

> Rate of success: 3%

I laughed at this =)

Failure Will Make My Pen Sharp as a Blade: My Writer's Life in Another World

Chapter:1

Aug 18, 2025

Your story isn't getting much attention but *I* like it 👍

Rockin' Reincarnation: The Reincarnated Superstar and His Spineless Host Will Rock This New World!

Chapter:4

Aug 14, 2025

I want glimpses of magic sooner than this chapter.

Your writing style is great though 👍

Flygirl In The Hole

Chapter:4

Aug 12, 2025

Missing a Sex option at the character creation screen... Or a hint that it's a game where you can only play as female characters.

*Very* minor thing, BTW. I think it would make it seem more like a normal game. Plus, you could have a bit of humor where she contemplates the pros and cons of starting over as a guy 🤣

ROM HACK // LOG.DD [ Laid-Off Game Dev Dimension ]

Chapter:3

Aug 11, 2025

No catgirl or foxgirl option? This is supposed to be isekai! Haha, just kidding 🤣 This is actually a really cool chapter. I love the concept of getting ahold of your new life's magical contract (as it were) and making modifications 👍

I Am The Prophesied Apocalypse - Volume 1

Chapter:2

Aug 11, 2025

Minor editing suggestion:

> She led us behind a corner and to a hole in the wall,

Might be better as:

> She led us behind a corner to a hole in the wall,

...or something like:

> She led us behind a corner—through a hole in the wall,

If you still want the 'and' it would make more sense for 'to' to be 'into':

> She led us behind a corner and into a hole in the wall,

...but it's such a minor thing *anyway*, doesn't really matter. The original isn't wrong—it just read kinda strange to me 🤷

BTW: You write very well. Great pacing 👍

The Sun Will Rise Again

Chapter:2

Aug 11, 2025

To:Maggi Lychee

Oh just you wait 😀

The real fun with physics is just getting started 👍

Maizy's Tails: Mass, Memory, Disorder

Chapter:17

Aug 10, 2025

To:lolitroy

This is actually explained a bit later: Maizy stayed in the pouch much longer than usual. So when she finally emerged she was a lot more "ready to go" than your typical kad/sugar glider. By the end of the story she's just a bit too big for Mom's pouch and that's only 8 days after this chapter.

For reference, here's a quote about sugar glider gestation IRL (which is crazy fast!):

> As is common with marsupials, gestation (pregnancy) usually only lasts 15 to 17 days. After birth the babies, called joeys, crawl into their mother's pouch, where they remain until they are 70 to 74 days old. Young sugar gliders usually wean themselves at about 4 months of age.

Maizy also has the memory tail which has been quietly enhancing her ability to learn speech. That's why she was picking up on the stuff being spoken outside the pouch while she was stuck in there.

I researched and thought really hard about all of that stuff when I wrote this... Trying to keep with a logical developmental timeline (in a world with magic, haha).

Also keep in mind that Mom still has to feed Maizy every day. Maizy is not old enough yet to go out hunting/foraging for food. She really *is* dependent on her parents (you'll get to meet dad eventually too!). Though, with *certain equipment* that might actually be possible (no spoilers!) hehe.

Maizy's Tails: Mass, Memory, Disorder

Chapter:2

Aug 10, 2025

Ahahaha I love everything about this! Keep going! FANTASTIC! 👍

Rockin' Reincarnation: The Reincarnated Superstar and His Spineless Host Will Rock This New World!

Chapter:2

Aug 10, 2025

YEAAAAAAH! What a kickass way to go out 👍

Great opening chapter.

Rockin' Reincarnation: The Reincarnated Superstar and His Spineless Host Will Rock This New World!

Chapter:1

Aug 10, 2025

Great heist scene 👍

I Alone Am The Fool

Chapter:1

Aug 10, 2025

"But… I know how hard you’ve been on yourself lately. With your writing competitions, you know?" 🤣

Otakus Somehow Have Taken Over The World?!

Chapter:2

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