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Father, Hacker (Information Security Professional), Open Source Software Developer, Inventor, and 3D printing enthusiast, and now, novelist.

registered at: Jun 26, 2025

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Sep 19, 2025

I have a feeling that Saif will go from grub to glory!

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:3

Sep 19, 2025

DINKUS! After: "I believe our little hatchling will blow us away. I just know it." 🤣

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:3

Sep 19, 2025

Need a dinkus after this line: "Hylfa and Bron soon fell asleep, excited for what the future brings."

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:2

Sep 19, 2025

Typo: "Said got a message from Sara this time." should be "Saif got a message from Sara this time."

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:1

Sep 19, 2025

You should put a dinkus after this line: "I hope Hylfa hasn’t left for work already."

HF doesn't support proper dinkus or horizontal rules so you just have to pick some characters and center them: * * * is common.

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:1

Sep 19, 2025

"They’re hanging on by a threat!" should probably be, "They’re hanging on by a thread!" 👍

BeetleBorn: Hatchling Hero

Chapter:1

Sep 13, 2025

Your story pacing is just <chef's kiss> 👍

I Don’t Take Bull from Anyone, Not Even a Demon Lord

Chapter:3

Sep 13, 2025

"Our town is know as Ohana." should be "Our town is known as Ohana."
(typo)

Our Town in another world

Chapter:1

Sep 13, 2025

Haha I love "Menshin Impact" 🤣

Minichi Time (Archived)

Chapter:1

Sep 13, 2025

"One and a half years after debut as a band" should probably be:

"One and a half years after the band's debut"

...but you could just fix the tense with "One and a half years after debuting as a band" (but that sounds weird).

Minichi Time (Archived)

Chapter:1

Sep 11, 2025

"That was why the business of a certain fledging shop..."
I'm pretty sure that's supposed to be "fledgling shop" 👍

Time and Time Again

Chapter:5

Sep 11, 2025

"It unfortunate that I didn’t possess a normal magic."
I think that's supposed to be "It's" 👍

Time and Time Again

Chapter:4

Sep 08, 2025

To:Mai

Ahaha, probably not. There's angry Maizy, terrified Maizy, and curious Maizy but they're all cute all the time. In the next book (if I ever get there) she's going to run into trouble getting people (non-kads) to take her seriously.

WHAT is going to laugh and laugh and laugh at her for this 🤣

Maizy's Tails: Mass, Memory, Disorder

Chapter:4

Sep 05, 2025

"The End."

You could totally mess with readers by putting that in there 🤣

Singularity

Chapter:13

Sep 05, 2025

> o she got up
Typo: o

Singularity

Chapter:9

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