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Sep 10, 2025

You've got the words down. The words themselves allowed me to follow pretty well, but your paragraph spacing needs work.
if you are on a computer, it should be easier to separate.

I don't remember this app letting you do indentions, but you could always put another line between paragraphs so we know where they end.

Another note: be careful about mixing dialogue paragraphs and regular paragraphs. I'd explain it here, but I'm not sure it'd help. Perhaps searching it up on YouTube could help?

Regardless, I like the idea you've got (which is why I liked it). Keep going!

Revenge in another world

Chapter:1

Sep 02, 2025

To:Uriel

Thank you. . . And God, I hope you're not a bot.

Ribbons Apart

Chapter:1

Sep 02, 2025

To:TheWriteKC

Thank you! I actually went through a list of, like, Top 1000 girl names to find it. (Also, I love your profile picture.)

Ribbons Apart

Chapter:1

Sep 02, 2025

Hello, people! If you're wondering what the comments are, someone (who appears to be a bot) tried to get me to pay $220/piece for art of Lorelei and Nico.
As cool as it was to get my first comment, it sucks that it wasn't a real person.

Ribbons Apart

Chapter:29

Sep 02, 2025

To:Nova Starx

My email is flowerpie4926@gmail.com.
Is that good?

Ribbons Apart

Chapter:29

Sep 02, 2025

To:Nova Starx

Sure! I'd love that!
I'm not sure how that works, though. What does it entail?

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Chapter:29

Sep 02, 2025

To:Nova Starx

Thank you so much!
You make it seem like you're going to stop, though.
If that is the case, I'm very thankful you got this far, at least.

Ribbons Apart

Chapter:29

Aug 13, 2025

I totally meant to change the chapter title, but I think I'll keep it. It's funny.

Ribbons Apart

Chapter:19

Aug 07, 2025

This one is my favorite, so far. I hope you enjoy it.

Ribbons Apart

Chapter:16

Aug 01, 2025

I may be biased, but I'd give anything to be friends with Andy.

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Chapter:13

Jul 20, 2025

Thank you for reading this far. Feel free to tell your thoughts (or don't, if that is what you prefer).

Ribbons Apart

Chapter:1

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