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Oct 12, 2025

To:FireFly Seia

*Ylfa.
Autocorrect won that round.

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:11

Oct 12, 2025

Oh, no. . .
Alfa, we love you here! Don't worry!

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:11

Oct 12, 2025

This. Girl. Is on FIREEEEEEE🎵

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:10

Oct 12, 2025

I wanna ride a Ylfa!!!
How come Jere gets to live my dreams?!

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:9

Oct 12, 2025

I love that you're not letting us forget that Ylfa is suddenly an enemy to her homeland. Yet you're also careful to be clear that she understands and accepts her decision.
I really love that.

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:8

Oct 12, 2025

Jere's heartbeat is the biggest MVP of this chapter.
Perfect mood setter.

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:7

Oct 12, 2025

This story is doing a good job of giving us just enough information sprinkled in, rather than all at once. It makes it a lot easier to catch all the lore.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:1

Oct 12, 2025

Oooh, very interesting start! A few things:
A) Why wasn't the man given a name if he's got two speaking lines? Doesn't that make it a little harder to remember him as the speaker? 'The man's sounds so impersonal? . . . Perhaps that was intentional. Maybe that's why this is just the prologue, huh? To build on such mysteries.
B) "Mayay. My suit is ripped." Is that a name?
C) Personal note: Suzu should be fired. (Also, our girl has such adorable lesbian energy that I'm melting)

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:0

Oct 11, 2025

I want a Ylfa to keep in my pocket. . .

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:6

Oct 11, 2025

To:Caelinth

1) Since It was never outlined what an enemy was, what he is patrolling for, or what counts as a demon, how could he accurately identify an enemy? Orcs could have been allies of the nation, for all I knew at that point (and I was scared he'd get in trouble for killing them as a result). What about a family play fighting? Is that not also an enemy to a guy who has seen nothing but war? Why didn't he get specifics, since it was stated before that he knew better than to blindly trust his data.
2) Yes, he had reasons, but neither of those reasons were pointed out until after the action was over. By that point, I was already confused.

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:4

Oct 11, 2025

I hope Jere put on his music after this. Just sitting on the floor seems boring as he'll.. .

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:5

Oct 11, 2025

To:FireFly Seia

Amendment: because she says she is a special case (she never denied being a demon. My bad).

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:4

Oct 11, 2025

In my mind, Jere sparing her kind of seems counterintuitive of his mission since, at this point, that sort of trumps all for him.
Since it was never specified (as far as I can tell) what Jere was patrolling against (I'm not sure Orcs are demons, anyway), he could very well have perceived her as a threat as soon as she revealed herself as not human.
An alternative:
A) Her dodging him makes him confused (which it does here), so he does not kill her immediately.
B) It is noted that killing whatever she is doesn't technically violate his mussion (since she says she isn'ta demon), deleting the conflict of interest that might be present here.

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:4

Oct 11, 2025

Imps: "Why do I hear boss music?"
Jere: "Oh, that is my MP3 Player. Do not worry."
(*Slices them*)

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:3

Oct 04, 2025

God, Jere is the perfect representation of a logical being. I've seen others where their attitude is logical, but their decisions not. Every move Jere makes is based on the protocol he was trained on, and I love how accurate that is for someone in his situation. . .
Can't wait to see if something (or someone) changes that : )

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:2

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