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Mar 20, 2026

To:saraharden

You started with the last chapter?

Shattering Stardust

Chapter:19

Feb 17, 2026

To:Crys Meer

I was so distracted with the physical assault that I forgot about that, lol

I Hate Dating Shows, So I Joined One to Ruin It!

Chapter:1

Feb 17, 2026

(You asked for critique in chat.)
I can't speak too deeply about the words themselves. Your grammar looks good, and I can see personality in your writing.

Your spacing is interesting. Many sentences are just their own paragraphs when, traditionally, they might be pooled together. From what I know, paragraphs are defined as one set theme. If it's all about, say, describing a place, that can all be in one paragraph.
Then again, you're not the only one I've seen with this quirk, so maybe it just falls down to preference.
I also don't fully understand why it sometimes goes to italics. Some of those I recognize as thoughts, but others make it seem like Astro is in a flashback. Maybe that's just a style choice? It's not like it's a bad thing, but I'd be careful if you ever did want to put in a flashback (maybe have those be in bold if you do add them?).

EmBarking Into Love

Chapter:1

Feb 16, 2026

This chapter hit me right in the depression.

I Wanna Tell You About My Schizo Friends But I'm Not Sure They'll Let Me

Chapter:0

Feb 16, 2026

Him getting punched was funnier than it should have been.
And with that attitude, he kind of deserved it.

I Hate Dating Shows, So I Joined One to Ruin It!

Chapter:1

Feb 16, 2026

*Screams in binary*

Destroyers: Your Touch or Oblivion

Chapter:0

Feb 16, 2026

"What the fluff?!"
I'm using that.

Melody: The Phantom Thief

Chapter:1

Feb 16, 2026

Eita, first rule of fiction: if you're the only one acknowledging someone, they probably don't see her.
Amateur mistake.
(Also, he seems like a compassionate guy, and I respect that.)

Requiem of the Fallen

Chapter:1

Feb 16, 2026

"Hey, kid. Gullible's written on the ceiling."

Of unfading sparks

Chapter:1

Feb 16, 2026

Wow, this is a really creative concept!

The Last Ink-Mage

Chapter:1

Feb 16, 2026

Petition to roundhouse kick Aoji out a window 🖐️

Mama Bear, Papa Wolf

Chapter:1

Feb 16, 2026

My dyslexic ass keeps reading it as 'Mr. Hetero' and I'm not sure how I feel about that.

Magical Intern Ayame

Chapter:1

Feb 15, 2026

YES! We got justice for Erika!
This is the perfect ending for her character, and I'm so fricking glad I decided to read this last chapter on those grounds alone.
As for the others. . .
I love how their uniqueness showed throughout this. Sachiko and Maeko's logic behind their decision is so unusual and so beautifully them. Hina and Yasu's story is both familiar and foreign, especially in this chapter.
All in all a great story, one I am more than happy to have read through.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:29

Feb 15, 2026

I can tell how much you love your lesbian astronauts.
You did a great job giving them the ending they deserved---peaceful, full.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:20

Feb 08, 2026

Oh, the phrasing is excellent, especially in the political parts. Carefully worded phrases, precise, intentional moves on both sides, those were absolutely perfect, specifically for an event that would be on blast to the world if ANYTHING went wrong.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:19

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