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A self-published author of "The Guardian of Hope."
Drafts available, up until Chapter 28~ Links below for the paperback and ebook~
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Aug 23, 2022
To:Deleted User
This is the only story where I've made an active effort to keep them apart, besides The Guardian of Hope, which tbf is their first meeting. I'm not sure how to feel about the following chapter though. I'll get on the stammer too... It was a busy few days for me. T . T
Aug 18, 2022
You're right! That was quite the dilemna for me. xD The chapter was a lot more measured as a result. I'm left somewhat satisfied. Last year I thought I couldn't reach the min. Now, I'm here keeping it below the max. Yeah, I can't wait to see how this plays out! :3
There was so much more I wanted to add in this chapter. T.T
The chase with Cire would've lasted longer, and I feel there was an important point I underemphasized. Going forward, its a competition with the word count. I jist hope I can still encapsukate the story well enough. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter's intensity~
Aug 16, 2022
Thanks. It was important to drive those points. In a lot of ways, Mikail and Raquel are quite similar thematically to our main duo.
I guess that's one way to contrast Raquel and Mikail's perspective.
And Cire? It wouldn't be the only time I'd imagine powerful figures preside over someone else's demise. Both via fiction and real life.
Aug 15, 2022
To:lukas53
Writing is a very measured and dynamic process. Its about how the reader interprets it as much as the writer. Some may not quite get it because of the choppiness. There is a plethora of editing programs you can use. Many free, but covers the essenials~
You clearly have a story. Express it!
Aug 14, 2022
Caught up with the past few chapters. It kinda feels like you've done little to improve. The story feels hard to follow as a result as some things are vague or overly dramatized when the writng can't live up to said concepts. I can't feel much connection with the characters or the events.
Aug 11, 2022
Well, there is certainly a sadder tale to be told there. There's just bits and pieces of that story... Something I'll delve into in my next story~
I thought I was leading onto that. xD I was kinda conflicted at first, but with their interwoven backstory I made up it made sense with hiearchies and the like.
Aug 09, 2022
Yup. I wanted to do a nod to those legends~ :D
There are some accounts, mostly from hundreds of years ago. They're interesting reads, quite gruesome for some of them; Fascinating, nonetheless. That includes the Snallygaster, which either relies on misidentification or a super tall tale. I think there's can be some truth in legends.
Frederick is within the region where the Snallygaster and Blair Witch legends take place, all being within my home state. I wanted to integrate some of them into a story... There's a little more to it. I don't think it can be done with the word count. However, the forests within that region were said to be cursed long before the settlers arrived. The name is based what was documented.
Silesta's possession explains a lot about the powers she had. Everything is triggered by self-defense.
Aug 04, 2022
To:S.Esquivias
Ara~ The cover reflects the character's relationship well. Leirix did an awesome job~
Ah yes and my apologies for not replying too! I've been terribly busy between work and writing. I don't sleep as much as I should. Writing is like breathing for me so I lose track of time. xD
I'll be sure to check yours out whenever you drop it. And, welcome to the HF community!
TYSM! T.T I'm always second-guessing myself these days! Thanks for reading!
I enjoyed writing their interactions. It was a pretty spontaneous process. The love language for them is definitely the comfort with each other, words and actions, etc... Especially as a developing family unit. They're connection doesn't need much elaboration. Approximating their relationship was a bit of a challenge. There's a plethora of events that happened leading up this story. Call it a bit of "logical leap" from The Guardian of Hope.
I want to give Mikail exposure since he's an interesting element. While change is about moving forward one comes to terms with the past. Personally he's quite admirable.
