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Paul Losonso

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📚 Writer | Storyteller | Observer of the quietly strange. Sharing fiction, fragments, & thoughts on the creative life.

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Dec 25, 2025

To:Mai

Of course! 😊
I have to find out how it ends!
And... if Ina isn't princess Raiona... that would be a great twist! Though, I'm not hoping it.

Well, sorry to be the lousy reader I am (slow like a turtle 😅), but, I'll get there eventually 💪

Anyway, wishing you a merry Christmas and a bless new year! ✨

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:11

Dec 10, 2025

I believe the cushion has been the protagonist in this chapter! 😁

Man... I haven't reached half the story and I already feel Celphi is the one for Ina 😅

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:12

Dec 10, 2025

I appreciated the focus on Isrina's character arc. Her secret training in the Ouroboros Fang was a compelling moment, showing her commitment and sacrifice for her son's future.

I also liked the relief and banter between Shien and Phoenicia once she was rescued! 😋

All was well written, too. Looking forward to the next chapter 👍🏻

Cyanic Odyssey

Chapter:13

Dec 02, 2025

So careless of Celphi to leave you wander off like that! 😤
Tsk tsk tsk

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:11

Nov 23, 2025

Victory!
And phoenicia's back. The team now has a healer again 😁👍🏻

Cyanic Odyssey

Chapter:12

Nov 23, 2025

Okay. The journal keeps our interest going. But, by now, I'm wondering what's up with Ina and Celphi.
Haven't seen the next chapter(s), yet. I suppose the naration would takes us back to them shortly.
Well done, so far. Jolly good 👍🏻

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:10

Nov 23, 2025

"I'm so kind" 🤣

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:10

Nov 16, 2025

To:Mai

They sure are well digestible. Keep them coming!
And yeah, Elder Scrolls. Some of the most interesting "lost/found" journals out there (in games at least).

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:8

Nov 12, 2025

It's all a quick chase, adrenaline rush of a scene 💥
The one thing I find a bit peculiar is the way Sandra, the agent speaks in Shakespearean English, or so.
Other than that, for a "party" stuck in a real-life online game, it sure has a lot of action! 👍🏻
Plus, I learned something new: always thought war fans were only a myth. But this had me digging and found out the truth. Super cool!

Cyanic Odyssey

Chapter:11

Nov 11, 2025

Engaging Journal 📖
Interesting seasons too.
Why would Raiona use different ones in her journal though (she did mention she would).
Probably she already knows about Earth seasons (somehow) and likes them more?
I guess we'll find out...
All well written in any case 🙂👍

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:9

Nov 09, 2025

To:Mai

Hmm... a water creature ey?
Well... alright!
If that's "my" only option/ chance... I will not pass it 😅👍

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:3

Nov 09, 2025

To:Mike Psellos

Nice observation on the base 10 mathematics, Mike.
Hadn't even noticed until I read you mentioning it 👍

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:8

Nov 09, 2025

Nice journal.
I enjoyed it 📖

I actually always enjoyed reading journals in books, or wherever...
I think I mustn't have left a single journal unread even in Morrowind (yeah, way back then), when I first started digging the genre.

This one was realistically written to the tone of an 8-year-old princess 👍

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:8

Nov 09, 2025

Lots of "Matrix" vibes in this one.
But still, overall, a good progression of the story and the characters and with even higher stakes than before 👍

Cyanic Odyssey

Chapter:10

Nov 08, 2025

To:Mai

Thank you so much, Mai, for reading through.
Hope it was worth your while 😊

The Common Ground

Chapter:47

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