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Paul Losonso

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📚 Writer | Storyteller | Observer of the quietly strange. Sharing fiction, fragments, & thoughts on the creative life.

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Feb 06, 2026

To:Katsuhito

This is called: attention to detail 😁👍
I'm glad you enjoy Fawks's character!

The Common Ground

Chapter:9

Feb 02, 2026

To:Katsuhito

Glad you liked her. She's also one of my favourites.
Now... concerning "worldbuilding" I had way more to share, but I did it only superficially here to not "info-dumb" on one go.
This still leaves many questions for later... but I hope it worked well for now.

The Common Ground

Chapter:8

Feb 02, 2026

To:Mai

Hahaha
That's fair! 😅
Alright. I promise I will.
Slow... and "steady"

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:11

Feb 02, 2026

To:Mai

Wishing you all the same Mai.
Glad to see you remain productive 👍🏻

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:11

Feb 02, 2026

To:Mai

What kind of event? 🤔

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:11

Jan 27, 2026

To:Katsuhito

Yeah, more explanations on "how-to" later on!
And of course Fawks should be and is (I hope) lovable to most, if not all.
Now, Red... she's one of my favorites. Very Resolute.

The Common Ground

Chapter:7

Jan 25, 2026

You can tell this has a happy ending.
In fact, that's your happy ending right there!
Oh, no... 😮 will Saitori die?! 😬

Cyanic Odyssey

Chapter:14

Jan 25, 2026

Very intense!
(Cruel too: I'm glad this ain't a real thing 😅)
So, if it's checkmate, he and his survivors go free...
What about you and yours?
🪦?

The Executioner's Gambit

Chapter:1

Jan 25, 2026

Taste that? 🤯 Why?
Don't wanna kiss him?
Just slap him!
Don't... that's poisonous, no?

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:13

Jan 22, 2026

To:Katsuhito

I sure am glad if it's indeed intriguing ☺️
Btw, your "gut" serves you well 👍🏻

The Common Ground

Chapter:6

Jan 20, 2026

To:Katsuhito

Thank you for your comment! 😊
There are weird things happening in this world, so, if you do find anything TOO off (you know what I mean), let me know...

Also: can't spoil on Fawks's fate 😅

The Common Ground

Chapter:4

Jan 16, 2026

I happened to read this first...
I know! One should start from the beginning, but it was an honest "what is this about I wonder" type of thing, so...

Now... I'm not a critique, but I do like the writing, the dialogues, the inner monologue (this is also something I need to learn and start using so myself) and the whole setting.

What I also find really interesting and I'm sure it adds a lot to the narrative (even though I haven't read the rest) is the fact that (as I happen to notice by glancing on the previous chapter) the point of view shifts between the protagonists throughout the chapters.
A nicely preformed idea 👍🏻 if I may say so 🧐

PhotoKoi: To The Girl I See Beyond The Lens

Chapter:15

Jan 16, 2026

To:Katsuhito

Haha – I haven't even though about the truck driver, to be honest.
Nice point of view! 👍🏻

The Common Ground

Chapter:3

Jan 16, 2026

To:Katsuhito

You got the first pieces just right 😊👍🏻

The Common Ground

Chapter:2

Jan 16, 2026

To:Katsuhito

Oh, Katsuhito! Hey 👋🏻
Thanks so much for your feedback.

I usually try to look for "what would NOT be typical" and I usually fail by either overdoing it, or simply miss iss to avoid the clichés.

The Common Ground

Chapter:1

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