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📚 Writer | Storyteller | Observer of the quietly strange. Sharing fiction, fragments, & thoughts on the creative life.

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aaa

Jan 12, 2026

Great atmosphere.
Great dialogues.
It's intriguing already.

Also, wondering about those "missing" mooses. Are they "simply" rare. Are they also special?

Let's see 👍🏼

Moosetrack Ridge

Chapter:1

Jan 11, 2026

Nice chapter!
VERY intense writing ✍🏻
Mai, you're very good in describing internal conflict... and struggling in general... and you know it! 😏

Now, addressing Caleb the fool, concerning his oath (this goes to ALL Catholics)

1Tim 3:2 "A bishop then must be blameless, the HUSBAND of ONE WIFE, vigilant, sober, of good behavior, given to hospitality, apt to teach;"

Mat 5:34-37: "But I say unto you, SWEAR NOT AT ALL; neither by heaven; for it is God's throne: Nor by the earth; for it is his footstool: neither by Jerusalem; for it is the city of the great King. Neither shalt thou swear by thy head, because thou canst not make one hair white or black. But let your communication be, Yea, yea; Nay, nay: for whatsoever is more than these cometh of evil." [Jesus]

Called To You

Chapter:22

Dec 25, 2025

To:Mai

Of course! 😊
I have to find out how it ends!
And... if Ina isn't princess Raiona... that would be a great twist! Though, I'm not hoping it.

Well, sorry to be the lousy reader I am (slow like a turtle 😅), but, I'll get there eventually 💪

Anyway, wishing you a merry Christmas and a bless new year! ✨

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:11

Dec 10, 2025

I believe the cushion has been the protagonist in this chapter! 😁

Man... I haven't reached half the story and I already feel Celphi is the one for Ina 😅

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:12

Dec 10, 2025

I appreciated the focus on Isrina's character arc. Her secret training in the Ouroboros Fang was a compelling moment, showing her commitment and sacrifice for her son's future.

I also liked the relief and banter between Shien and Phoenicia once she was rescued! 😋

All was well written, too. Looking forward to the next chapter 👍🏻

Cyanic Odyssey

Chapter:13

Dec 02, 2025

So careless of Celphi to leave you wander off like that! 😤
Tsk tsk tsk

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:11

Nov 23, 2025

Victory!
And phoenicia's back. The team now has a healer again 😁👍🏻

Cyanic Odyssey

Chapter:12

Nov 23, 2025

Okay. The journal keeps our interest going. But, by now, I'm wondering what's up with Ina and Celphi.
Haven't seen the next chapter(s), yet. I suppose the naration would takes us back to them shortly.
Well done, so far. Jolly good 👍🏻

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:10

Nov 23, 2025

"I'm so kind" 🤣

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:10

Nov 16, 2025

To:Mai

They sure are well digestible. Keep them coming!
And yeah, Elder Scrolls. Some of the most interesting "lost/found" journals out there (in games at least).

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:8

Nov 12, 2025

It's all a quick chase, adrenaline rush of a scene 💥
The one thing I find a bit peculiar is the way Sandra, the agent speaks in Shakespearean English, or so.
Other than that, for a "party" stuck in a real-life online game, it sure has a lot of action! 👍🏻
Plus, I learned something new: always thought war fans were only a myth. But this had me digging and found out the truth. Super cool!

Cyanic Odyssey

Chapter:11

Nov 11, 2025

Engaging Journal 📖
Interesting seasons too.
Why would Raiona use different ones in her journal though (she did mention she would).
Probably she already knows about Earth seasons (somehow) and likes them more?
I guess we'll find out...
All well written in any case 🙂👍

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:9

Nov 09, 2025

To:Mai

Hmm... a water creature ey?
Well... alright!
If that's "my" only option/ chance... I will not pass it 😅👍

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:3

Nov 09, 2025

To:Mike Psellos

Nice observation on the base 10 mathematics, Mike.
Hadn't even noticed until I read you mentioning it 👍

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:8

Nov 09, 2025

Nice journal.
I enjoyed it 📖

I actually always enjoyed reading journals in books, or wherever...
I think I mustn't have left a single journal unread even in Morrowind (yeah, way back then), when I first started digging the genre.

This one was realistically written to the tone of an 8-year-old princess 👍

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:8

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