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📚 Writer | Storyteller | Observer of the quietly strange. Sharing fiction, fragments, & thoughts on the creative life.

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Sep 24, 2025

Hey, everyone!

I've just uploaded the third and final image to the Showcase section of this book—a map of the Common Ground 🗺️
This felt like the perfect time to share it, given the reference to a map in this chapter.

The Common Ground

Chapter:35

Sep 23, 2025

To:Sen Kumo

Carry on 👍
That was the only option for me too!
(if you read "The Last Watch" chapters on mine, you'll understand)
Cheers 🍻

I am the Hero of My Story

Chapter:29

Sep 23, 2025

I really enjoyed the way the two storylines ran in parallel. The pacing felt great, and it was a clever way to build tension and keep me guessing about how everything connects 👍

I am the Hero of My Story

Chapter:29

Sep 18, 2025

You're entitled to your opinion. My work stands on its own 👍

The Common Ground

Chapter:4

Sep 18, 2025

To:Mohammed Zawia

Hey, Mohammed Zawia,

I've really put too much work into this project and I don't need this.
If you don't like it, that's fine, have it your way.
But, please, don't insult me!

Cheers,

The Common Ground

Chapter:4

Sep 12, 2025

I found the plot progression particularly engaging. The capture of Rui really raised the stakes and made me eager to see how the characters will handle the increasing danger 👍

The Granddaughter's Isekai Redemption

Chapter:15

Sep 12, 2025

That moment with Silva's tears, turning from fear to relief, was really powerful. It beautifully showed the characters' strong bond 👍

Ronin in Another World

Chapter:22

Sep 12, 2025

It's brilliant how the story misleads us into thinking Keitaro is in trouble, making the reveal that it was all a planned trick much more satisfying 👍

NEET Siblings Transported to an Alternate Universe to Fight in a Battle Royale

Chapter:25

Sep 12, 2025

I really liked how the dialogue not only revealed the protagonist's secret but also advanced the plot by introducing Basil's theory. It was an efficient way to move the story forward 👍

Me, as the Great Witch?

Chapter:3

Sep 12, 2025

I really appreciated the creative conflict resolution in this chapter—subduing the corrupted villagers instead of just defeating them. It was a great way to show the heroes' compassion 👍

To Save The World, Let's Make A Contract!

Chapter:7

Sep 09, 2025

I really enjoyed how the different storylines were used to create a fast-paced and engaging narrative 👍

Death By Design

Chapter:5

Sep 09, 2025

The world-building is so vivid and unique! The descriptions of the underwater city and its blend of architecture and sea life create a distinct and interesting setting 👍

The Empress of the Blue

Chapter:6

Sep 09, 2025

To:Idle Mind

Practice makes perfect!
I'll be waiting to read the rest 🙂👍

The Common Ground

Chapter:2

Sep 09, 2025

To:Idle Mind

That's so kind of you to say. I think a lot of us feel that way, but the best thing you can do is just keep writing. Your work is proof that you're already a great storyteller—the words you choose are a big part of that, whether you realize it or not! 👍

The Common Ground

Chapter:2

Sep 09, 2025

To:Idle Mind

Thank you so much! It means a lot to know that the scene resonated with you so strongly 😊

The Common Ground

Chapter:2

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