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Paul Losonso

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📚 Writer | Storyteller | Observer of the quietly strange. Sharing fiction, fragments, & thoughts on the creative life.

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Oct 19, 2025

One boss down. Two to go! 💪

Btw, at some point I read that a grenade blew in Shien's face, right?
So, like in a game, no matter the strike, it only kills you (or does actual harm), if it lowers your HP below zero, right?

Cyanic Odyssey

Chapter:7

Oct 18, 2025

Real nice!
Blaming one another for their imprisoned was utterly realistical, and well presented.

Of course, Pliny's and Pompanianus's teachings weren't in vain as we see. And mixing Latin with Common to discuss their plan while wailing is an excellent idea that, if played well, could truly work in a real life scenario too 💡

One thing I don't get, however:
(might be explained later on)
Since only Barbara was with the others, how was everyone in the ship caught? 🤔

Pliniad: Roman Genius Will Unite This Godforsaken Realm

Chapter:27

Oct 18, 2025

To:Mike Psellos

That's a great punch! 😆

Funnily enough, when I first conceived the original idea, I had imagined those pale people constantly stuck to imaginative mobile screens 📱, completely ignoring everything around them and living in their own little world.
A lot has changed since those initial ideas, though 👍🏻

The Common Ground

Chapter:31

Oct 18, 2025

To:Mike Psellos

You mean, like The Wizard of Oz?
No... I always hated that part of that story. SO, disappointing! 🙄

That said, be aware that the trimming in my story has already started. You should expect to see its impact grow heavier in the next two or three chapters and beyond ✍🏻

The Common Ground

Chapter:32

Oct 18, 2025

To:Mike Psellos

I'm sincerely glad you found it relatable 😊
I actually think I could have done a much better job writing this. But, at this point time was pressing hard on me and, well, it was a hard part to write ✍🏻

The Common Ground

Chapter:33

Oct 17, 2025

To:Mike Psellos

Pretty much! 😆
Well... in most cases that is 😋

The Common Ground

Chapter:30

Oct 17, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

You do well to follow Cecile's lead 😉
(Also, never forget I had to trim like crazy)

The Common Ground

Chapter:41

Oct 17, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

You're very close to finding that out 🤓

The Common Ground

Chapter:40

Oct 17, 2025

The chances of Red failing her mission to find Vorath were even lower than the chances of Elias and his team not bumping into his advancing army towards the city they had just left.
So –what do you know– they met! 😁

The Common Ground

Chapter:39

Oct 17, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

What can I say? Thanks for reading!
And I'm really glad you're enjoying it 😊

The Common Ground

Chapter:38

Oct 17, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

Hahaha! Yet another door, yes. 🚪😂
But, this one with a purpose!

As you said it. That was the Shade leader they had met.
For whom the others had told them that they well lucky to have survived.

The Common Ground

Chapter:37

Oct 17, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

I always loved making the best fortified city in any game! 😅
I think that, if I had one favourite city among all fictional worlds, I'd pick Gondolin! 🏔️🏰⛰️

The Common Ground

Chapter:36

Oct 17, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

I'm glad you found it a nice touch! 😊
It's actually quite an detail thought the book 📖

The Common Ground

Chapter:35

Oct 17, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

I'm glad you found it heartwarming as you say. 😊 I hope the reveal was well placed too!
While I was writing till this point most of my worry was "will I manage to write the reveal in a good, moving way?"

Also, Bard erupted like a volcano.🌋 He didn't care how powerful the other person was. He had found a root cause for many problems and he simply had to make his point! 📢

The Common Ground

Chapter:34

Oct 17, 2025

If only such historical books full of sarcasm remained to this very day! 😁

Pliniad: Roman Genius Will Unite This Godforsaken Realm

Chapter:26

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