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Paul Losonso

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📚 Writer | Storyteller | Observer of the quietly strange. Sharing fiction, fragments, & thoughts on the creative life.

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Sep 01, 2025

Author’s Note (September 1st, 2025):
Hello, everyone! Just a quick heads-up: this chapter (and the one before it) has been almost completely reworked. I’ve woven in a parallel storyline that runs alongside the main thread, so both the title and the core content are different now. If you’ve read the earlier version, I recommend giving it another read to catch all the changes.

Cheers!

The Common Ground

Chapter:13

Sep 01, 2025

Author’s Note (September 1st, 2025):
Hello, everyone! Just a quick heads-up: this chapter (and the next one) has been almost completely reworked. I’ve woven in a parallel storyline that runs alongside the main thread, so both the title and the core content are different now. If you’ve read the earlier version, I recommend giving it another read to catch all the changes.

Cheers!

The Common Ground

Chapter:12

Aug 27, 2025

The chapter effectively builds tension through the conversation between Yuna and the disembodied voice before introducing Shin 👍

Ashes of the Chosen: Volume 1

Chapter:28

Aug 27, 2025

This is to let everyone know that I've finally decided to change the title of my work-in-progress to "The Common Ground"!

(Not sure how to change the cover image too though...)

The Common Ground

Chapter:1

Aug 24, 2025

I'm curious to see what happens next now that Sisli has revealed her identity. The boss room sounds intense. 👍

How the wicked witch became the hero's sidekick

Chapter:17

Aug 24, 2025

It's a nice detail that the protagonist is trying to place the timeline of this world. I found it interesting 👍

Reincarnated into My Favorite Game, But I Forgot Everything I Knew About It

Chapter:20

Aug 24, 2025

Text: "How could Cirus simply forget a crucial part of their journey back to Tor Alian?..."
Me: He's obviously hiding something!
Text: "...It was obvious he was concealing something[...]"
Me: There you go! XD

P.S. The journey by river seems like a fitting change of pace for the characters. 👍

The Sapphire Legacy

Chapter:37

Aug 24, 2025

To:Stealth303

Hey Stealth303!
Welcome to my little work-in-progress, and thank you so much for your kind words — they’re a wonderful compliment and really encouraging to hear! 😊

The Common Ground

Chapter:1

Aug 24, 2025

The 'maid' job is a brilliant twist on the usual Isekai tropes. This makes Protag-kun a very relatable hero.
Who knew a fantasy world would still make you feel like a shut-in struggling with a part-time job? 👍

Otakus Somehow Have Taken Over The World?!

Chapter:12

Aug 22, 2025

This was a great first chapter. The severity of the punishment for stealing apples was an effective detail that really set the tone.
I'm also curious about what Lord Remus has in mind for the barrister 👍

The Barrister From Beyond

Chapter:1

Aug 21, 2025

To:KimbaBeans

Hey KimbaBeans!
Welcome to my little work-in-progress, and thank you so much for leaving the very first comment I’ve received here—it really means a lot. 🙏

I love that you picked up on something I hadn’t even considered: a more tragic lead-up to Elias’s comatose state. Touché! 😅 You’re right, that could’ve added another layer. However I do have a couple of reasons (actually three) why I didn’t lean into it.

That said, I appreciate your thoughtful comment—it really gave me a boost. Wishing you the best of success in your own creative work, too! 👍

The Common Ground

Chapter:3

Aug 21, 2025

I enjoyed the part where she took care of the bullies without a big fight 👍

Death’s Idea of a Joke: Welcome to Life 2.0, Now Figure It Out

Chapter:12

Aug 21, 2025

The way you describe the psychological trial and the characters' dynamics is very well done.
While the more surreal elements aren't really my style, I really appreciate your creativity 👍

TORYNTH

Chapter:9

Aug 20, 2025

To:dany

Thanks for the advice 🙂👍

Uncanny Valley

Chapter:12

Aug 20, 2025

(Oh... btw, I saw you did edits. [I think]
Are we allowed to do edits on published chapters?
Actually... are we even allowed to change the book title?! [if it were a "working title"]
Thanks!)

Uncanny Valley

Chapter:12

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