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Paul Losonso

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📚 Writer | Storyteller | Observer of the quietly strange. Sharing fiction, fragments, & thoughts on the creative life.

registered at: Aug 13, 2025

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Sep 12, 2025

That moment with Silva's tears, turning from fear to relief, was really powerful. It beautifully showed the characters' strong bond 👍

Ronin in Another World

Chapter:22

Sep 12, 2025

It's brilliant how the story misleads us into thinking Keitaro is in trouble, making the reveal that it was all a planned trick much more satisfying 👍

NEET Siblings Transported to an Alternate Universe to Fight in a Battle Royale

Chapter:25

Sep 12, 2025

I really liked how the dialogue not only revealed the protagonist's secret but also advanced the plot by introducing Basil's theory. It was an efficient way to move the story forward 👍

Me, as the Great Witch?

Chapter:3

Sep 12, 2025

I really appreciated the creative conflict resolution in this chapter—subduing the corrupted villagers instead of just defeating them. It was a great way to show the heroes' compassion 👍

To Save The World, Let's Make A Contract!

Chapter:7

Sep 09, 2025

I really enjoyed how the different storylines were used to create a fast-paced and engaging narrative 👍

Death By Design

Chapter:5

Sep 09, 2025

The world-building is so vivid and unique! The descriptions of the underwater city and its blend of architecture and sea life create a distinct and interesting setting 👍

The Empress of the Blue

Chapter:6

Sep 09, 2025

To:Idle Mind

Practice makes perfect!
I'll be waiting to read the rest 🙂👍

The Common Ground

Chapter:2

Sep 09, 2025

To:Idle Mind

That's so kind of you to say. I think a lot of us feel that way, but the best thing you can do is just keep writing. Your work is proof that you're already a great storyteller—the words you choose are a big part of that, whether you realize it or not! 👍

The Common Ground

Chapter:2

Sep 09, 2025

To:Idle Mind

Thank you so much! It means a lot to know that the scene resonated with you so strongly 😊

The Common Ground

Chapter:2

Sep 08, 2025

I'll become a fan of your afterwords 😋👍

My Strongest Familiar

Chapter:38

Sep 07, 2025

To:RodoJustice

Thanks for the detailed reply. The idea of using a shared history to reduce division is an interesting layer to the story.

Immor(t)al Kill

Chapter:13

Sep 06, 2025

The immediate introduction of a body-swap, a murder, and a tight 12-hour deadline to complete a mission makes for an incredibly fast-paced and high-stakes opening that immediately hooks the reader 👍

Hero Duality

Chapter:6

Sep 06, 2025

Using a cooking scene to reveal major lore is a clever way to avoid an info-dump. The pacing feels great—it’s a natural and engaging way to deliver key details 👍

Blood Ties

Chapter:6

Sep 06, 2025

The history lesson was a great way to provide background, and it's interesting how it's presented from the empress's perspective, highlighting the role of power in shaping historical narratives 👍

Immor(t)al Kill

Chapter:13

Sep 06, 2025

The healing method was certainly a unique and humorous element 😋

Faith in Them - Things are not so good in this new world, but at least I have my best friends!

Chapter:19

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